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Exquisite Corpse

Death	Contributor
Death - something i look forward to - a new beginning..........	mamta
It began with an end - an explosion of decay	hotstuff
fodder for a new, not necessarily better beginning	galley_poet
for those of the bearer, when his hands come out shriveled, ready.. to turn their faces back to blank canvas, wiped with the slime of undoing.	ColourMyWorld
groping and stumbling through the dark tunnel - moving ahead with hope and determination to reach the violet flame.	mamta
- satisfy!	ColourMyWorld
Graphite mirrors reflect an endless array of faded memories	hotstuff
of epitaphs carved upon roughly hewn marble memorials	galley_poet
and only memories - good and bad remain	mamta
for the present is fleeting.	ColourMyWorld
and the only way to go is forward into the haze	galley_poet
faded memories whisper into muffled ears	hotstuff
end of one lifetime filled with sorrows and joy	mamta
and with a flickering flame, eternity begins	galley_poet
with the wind heading the right way, eternity burns	ColourMyWorld
like mournful eclipses, souls wander amidst the living	hotstuff
and feel souls' impact in their daily lives	galley_poet
new soul flitting from one life to another like going from one room to another	mamta
doom shudders passing through ripples of the skin	ColourMyWorld
like a jack-in-the-box, this life is building to it's peak	hotstuff

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Re: [No Subject] (Score: 1 )
by hotstuff on Tuesday, December 25, 2007 (22:17:31)

crap..itsssss not it's...I wish we could modify!

Re: [No Subject] (Score: 1 )
by butterflyzrfree on Friday, July 24, 2009 (14:46:52)

Actually, this one turned out so much better than they usually do!