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Exquisite Corpse
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dull knife, sink wet, perspiring |
questionajourney |
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respiring, devious duck - diving - drVing - waterizing into spLash! boolderiZing!!!! |
induce |
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there was that little bit of goo stuck to the side of the cauldron..eye of newton |
graphitegirl |
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swamped, saturated, sated sponge, |
HSTeech |
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of neurologic waterslides, with sprinklers on random |
questionajourney |
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shifting sand castLe orange slipstreaming notes find motes beside eYes of LCD Neo-AdaptION remiX sLiced fraMe... |
induce |
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blowing her nose she found him there between the cloth as slimy as ever |
graphitegirl |
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a silken trail behind, reflective of moist moments passed |
HSTeech |
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still damp and meek..a low shine soak of passion embers |
questionajourney |
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squishy swamp night full moon frog's tongue contains a band called The Cramps they sing together |
induce |
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on heartbreak eve the mop up crew's on standby before the pain stains |
graphitegirl |
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swabbing sea sprayed surfaces, clearing the way, the puddled path |
HSTeech |
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resumes with smothered particles, meshing mercury and sand |
questionajourney |
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y, glass meLtinG! a hypnogogic adventure, 4 aLL sizes, dashes spectrim* mOtOr chOrds |
induce |
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releasing a typhoon of tears the bombs fell anyway |
graphitegirl |
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and made blood puddles, our boots mired in the morass, we stood with our lives assunder. |
HSTeech |
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 | Re: [No Subject]
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by induce on Wednesday, September 03, 2008 (10:37:51) |
 whereizall......?
| Re: [No Subject]
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by induce on Thursday, September 04, 2008 (16:21:09) |
Quesssssssssssssst one response per round could put people off, in the past I've find go for gold to be quick and easy, although.....i've stiLL got one here .... sitting.
Damn I love writing games, and damn I wish we could all play one! 
inducErinG 
 | Re: [No Subject]
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by questionajourney on Thursday, September 04, 2008 (18:27:09) |
i think i just started this one on auto..i'll keep my eye out next time..thanks ducerious...qwestern
 | Re: [No Subject]
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by graphitegirl on Friday, September 05, 2008 (21:07:20) |
Gloop - o - matic
 | Re: What am i doing here?
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by HSTeech on Sunday, September 07, 2008 (03:20:59) |
Uh, i meant to pm someone before I hit the join button...what am I doing here? Is this like a foldover poem or something? I should really stick to my day job...
| Re: [No Subject]
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by graphitegirl on Sunday, September 14, 2008 (18:00:19) |
no it's just liberating go with the flow
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