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The Rewrite Workshop By submitting a poem to this section you are asking others to basically tell you how they would write it themselves. If you post here you are saying that the poem is not working for me, help me tear it apart and rework it. Responses in this forum are supposed to really help you tear a poem apart and rework it. This is the only section where it is acceptable to rewrite a person's poem for them without permission.		Go to page Previous 1, 2, 3 ... , 13, 14, 15 Next
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	The Rewrite Workshop: Posting Guidelines	1	John	2332	Mon Dec 13 15:16:38 EST 2004 John
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	[she.murder]	5	ThursdayRain11	990	Mon Feb 28 16:54:11 EST 2005 Listen
	what eye sea	5	cmark	1179	Mon Feb 28 11:16:44 EST 2005 Ash
	First poem on this site, needs title, please help	15	Ash	1576	Mon Feb 28 11:12:12 EST 2005 Ash
	"Empty Set", please tear this apart.	8	TyrantOfPants	1155	Mon Feb 28 10:34:51 EST 2005 dancingtides
	SPACES - any suggestions for improvement?	4	beagle79	837	Wed Feb 23 15:30:33 EST 2005 Truston
	[living.for.the.weekends]	12	ThursdayRain11	1485	Mon Feb 21 9:39:06 EST 2005 ThursdayRain11
	Make-Believe	1	Winter	679	Mon Feb 21 7:04:40 EST 2005 Ash
	Anyone want to rewrite this?	19	John	2666	Sat Feb 19 5:37:49 EST 2005 Listen
	[blue.river]	0	ThursdayRain11	415	Fri Feb 18 6:26:42 EST 2005 ThursdayRain11
	sporatic thougths	0	cmark	497	Thu Feb 17 22:07:11 EST 2005 cmark
	1st of a few...from a while ago. PLEASE CRITIQUE HEAVILY!!!	3	shockfactor	751	Wed Feb 9 12:10:35 EST 2005 Ash
	B and E	2	cmark	601	Wed Feb 9 11:52:45 EST 2005 Ash
	Mud Puddles (and a * just for you, natey.)	2	Winter	684	Fri Feb 4 22:42:44 EST 2005 natey
	3rd one- I would call this a prose poem	0	shockfactor	393	Thu Feb 3 17:25:16 EST 2005 shockfactor
	2nd poem (see previous request!)	0	shockfactor	450	Thu Feb 3 17:23:39 EST 2005 shockfactor
	Wisdom	4	DionysiusB	844	Wed Feb 2 8:07:11 EST 2005 DionysiusB
	latest	7	Thinkums	1121	Mon Jan 31 18:53:38 EST 2005 beagle79
	Cycle	0	beagle79	409	Mon Jan 31 18:29:36 EST 2005 beagle79
	CRYSTAL BALL	0	beagle79	340	Mon Jan 31 18:25:17 EST 2005 beagle79
	The choice is YOURS!	5	cmark	930	Wed Jan 26 17:52:32 EST 2005 icespirit2
	shape-changers.	2	not_a_poet	708	Tue Jan 18 7:50:48 EST 2005 not_a_poet
	Critique please? ---- Untitled	2	nodxm	606	Mon Jan 17 15:43:11 EST 2005 Thinkums
	my notebook	1	cmark	523	Sat Jan 15 14:31:49 EST 2005 DionysiusB
	Stars	4	stillblue	781	Thu Jan 13 10:46:06 EST 2005 stillblue
	new title: kangaroo hoax	2	not_a_poet	672	Tue Jan 11 2:40:09 EST 2005 not_a_poet
	avoiding the christmas tree	10	not_a_poet	1105	Mon Jan 10 9:54:55 EST 2005 Thinkums
	[fourty.eight.hours]	2	ThursdayRain11	508	Sun Jan 9 8:30:58 EST 2005 ThursdayRain11
	THE USED FUKEN ROCK	1	cmark	456	Sun Jan 9 8:30:05 EST 2005 John
	Taxidermy Becomes You	3	not_a_poet	708	Sun Jan 9 3:45:41 EST 2005 not_a_poet
	the dumped song	2	cmark	516	Sun Jan 9 3:39:46 EST 2005 cmark
	New Work	9	Thinkums	1039	Thu Jan 6 23:20:41 EST 2005 Thinkums
	gone	3	stillblue	643	Tue Jan 4 6:40:23 EST 2005 not_a_poet
	Edit: "Roman History"	3	not_a_poet	738	Fri Dec 31 5:06:42 EST 2004 not_a_poet
	[brooklyn.bridge]	9	ThursdayRain11	1253	Mon Dec 27 11:30:39 EST 2004 Thinkums
	[hands.forever.covered.in.red]	0	ThursdayRain11	364	Sun Dec 26 17:52:54 EST 2004 ThursdayRain11
	[let.down]	0	ThursdayRain11	396	Fri Dec 24 16:48:33 EST 2004 ThursdayRain11
	BEING real?	2	cmark	572	Thu Dec 23 9:39:54 EST 2004 Mr.Peacester
	an unexpected re-write	7	Thinkums	1084	Mon Dec 20 11:36:32 EST 2004 Tony
	My Winter---critique please?	10	nodxm	1396	Sun Dec 19 15:17:54 EST 2004 stillblue
	Night Life	5	Listen	1060	Sun Dec 19 10:40:52 EST 2004 LoSt
	Critique Please -- "Crossing the skyscraper-bridge"	7	not_a_poet	985	Tue Dec 14 11:27:54 EST 2004 not_a_poet
	Scratch-Paper (be nice)	2	not_a_poet	460	Tue Dec 14 11:08:30 EST 2004 not_a_poet
	ONE PATH, ONE ASS	0	cmark	396	Tue Dec 14 6:03:13 EST 2004 cmark
	An unfortunate encounter with a mindless tongue	2	nodxm	673	Mon Dec 13 16:15:42 EST 2004 nodxm
	QUEEESTIONS	1	cmark	458	Mon Dec 13 15:13:33 EST 2004 John
	war	2	monkey	582	Sun Dec 12 9:13:33 EST 2004 Thinkums
	Wheeee-hoooo! [Critique please: "From a Photo..."	14	not_a_poet	1436	Sun Dec 12 9:00:00 EST 2004 Thinkums
	Input, please? "Friendlies" rewrite	9	not_a_poet	1492	Sun Dec 12 8:43:43 EST 2004 not_a_poet
	tatttlin'	2	cmark	546	Sat Dec 11 18:07:47 EST 2004 cmark
	An End Perfect [critique please...]	4	Thinkums	899	Sat Dec 11 17:05:18 EST 2004 monkey
	Critique me.	7	GIHo	2234	Fri Dec 3 21:24:21 EST 2004 Shaayna
	Little Blank Book	6	Listen	1159	Sun Nov 28 17:04:13 EST 2004 not_a_poet
	quickie	1	cmark	559	Thu Nov 25 5:15:13 EST 2004 John
	Stendhal Syndrome	9	Thinkums	1501	Tue Nov 23 12:19:53 EST 2004 not_a_poet
	Dressed	6	not_a_poet	1229	Mon Nov 22 10:41:39 EST 2004 not_a_poet
	Proconsul	6	not_a_poet	863	Sat Nov 20 21:59:22 EST 2004 not_a_poet
	Soft Sculpture	5	not_a_poet	827	Wed Nov 17 15:24:43 EST 2004 not_a_poet
	No Ped Xing	3	not_a_poet	673	Wed Nov 17 14:29:42 EST 2004 not_a_poet
	Rabidly Unsure	3	Thinkums	726	Mon Nov 15 18:00:44 EST 2004 not_a_poet
	heeeelp please :)	5	Winston_Smith	980	Thu Nov 11 16:17:00 EST 2004 Winston_Smith
	More Graffic-Lyrix	6	grafficlyrix	1224	Thu Nov 11 12:14:18 EST 2004 natey
	This needs constructive critiscm!	2	Dowordsandmetalmix?	684	Wed Nov 10 11:00:04 EST 2004 natey
	my least favorite poem to date... [cringe!]	3	not_a_poet	719	Wed Nov 10 10:57:35 EST 2004 natey
	Ghazal inspired...but very much not one	7	Thinkums	1033	Fri Nov 5 12:09:01 EST 2004 John
	Here's my little Graffic Sample	3	grafficlyrix	847	Fri Nov 5 6:41:56 EST 2004 John
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