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The Rewrite Workshop By submitting a poem to this section you are asking others to basically tell you how they would write it themselves. If you post here you are saying that the poem is not working for me, help me tear it apart and rework it. Responses in this forum are supposed to really help you tear a poem apart and rework it. This is the only section where it is acceptable to rewrite a person's poem for them without permission.		Go to page 1, 2, 3 ... 13, 14, 15 Next
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	The Rewrite Workshop: Posting Guidelines	1	John	2256	Mon Dec 13 14:16:38 EST 2004 John
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	Clichés [ Go to page: 1, 2 ]	28	John	6985	Fri Feb 8 13:06:49 EST 2008 jh89
	Abstractions Vs. Concrete Language	11	John	3733	Sat Aug 11 8:56:13 EDT 2007 Dea
	Quick Guide To Giving Critiques	0	John	1647	Sat Jul 17 9:56:40 EDT 2004 John
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	knot tonight	9	davek	150	Fri Nov 20 12:48:36 EST 2009 davek
	[ Poll ] rate this poem or tell me what to do with it	1	mandiiiii	67	Fri Nov 20 10:36:55 EST 2009 loisseau
	The Speed of Sound	1	TheLacynator	47	Thu Nov 19 15:01:21 EST 2009 loisseau
	T.O.W. (help needed plz)	1	princess.funk	79	Mon Nov 16 20:54:38 EST 2009 OhRedKite
	Unfinished and Untitled	3	sschubert	193	Mon Nov 16 16:55:36 EST 2009 princess.funk
	Taiwan -china-by cauchy3	0	cauchy3	40	Fri Nov 13 2:39:38 EST 2009 cauchy3
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	The Lump	2	Lyla	94	Tue Oct 27 9:09:52 EDT 2009 Bogeyman
	I am - Need Help	14	Lyla	404	Mon Oct 26 9:16:49 EDT 2009 Bogeyman
	Reposted for Tek - needs workshopping on this one	2	Zbird	147	Sat Oct 24 12:19:04 EDT 2009 Tek
	Haiku – I should? I shouldn’t?	8	Ridge	331	Wed Oct 21 7:40:05 EDT 2009 Ridge
	atheist	17	mlkyy	769	Thu Oct 15 2:43:04 EDT 2009 Ridge
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	Changed	7	aphroditespen	182	Wed Jul 1 18:18:48 EDT 2009 aphroditespen
	Me	6	SkaaDee	202	Tue Jun 30 20:49:49 EDT 2009 SkaaDee
	venice beach, ca. (revised) trying to make this work	4	nemissk8	208	Sun Jun 28 21:45:13 EDT 2009 aphroditespen
	Choked	3	BlindMind	178	Fri Jun 26 21:21:26 EDT 2009 aphroditespen
	Wishing Well	10	AttackRat	338	Fri Jun 26 20:30:23 EDT 2009 aphroditespen
	We Are The Insane	6	easyeverett	279	Tue Jun 23 8:43:50 EDT 2009 SkaaDee
	Nuns are good and yes--caucchy3	2	cauchy3	121	Thu Jun 11 17:15:52 EDT 2009 cauchy3
	this poem is about a guy who's real confident in himself	6	flyruga87	323	Fri May 22 12:12:08 EDT 2009 oldschooldetroit
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	No Title: TheBohemian Inspired	4	Blair_witch	209	Sat May 9 23:11:39 EDT 2009 Treagal
	Not Sure Of A Title And Need Constructive Criticism...	4	Blair_witch	282	Fri May 8 13:11:37 EDT 2009 versifier
	help me	1	jeremiah602	100	Fri May 8 12:56:48 EDT 2009 versifier
	British battleships--cauchy3	0	cauchy3	151	Wed May 6 3:06:03 EDT 2009 cauchy3
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	China bath	3	cauchy3	193	Tue Apr 7 6:00:33 EDT 2009 cauchy3
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