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flyruga87
Has the Poetry Bug
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 Posted: Fri Sep 11 22:01:12 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: my dreams are better |
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I don't want to fall but im
dizzy dazed.Holdin myself
up by the railing in front my
house. A gust of wind
blows dust into my right
eye. There is dust in my
right eye.
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bfaulkner
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| Posted: Wed Sep 16 6:22:09 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: my dreams are better |
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I don't want to fall
but that isn't all
I don't want to die;
I don't want to cry;
I don't want your love.
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T.E.D
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| Posted: Sat Sep 19 12:35:35 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: my dreams are better |
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I don't want your love,
Nor the car that you drove.
Just stay away, is all I ask
Because you never stopped
Wearing your mask.
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aphroditespen
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| Posted: Thu Sep 24 21:58:10 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: my dreams are better |
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'Wearing your mask'
Were the words that I heard
Okay, I'll expose--
Are we lovers or foes?
And now that you've see
Please take down the screen
Is it too hard a task?
Who's now wearing the mask?
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angeroseblue
Compares Alliteration, Assonance & Rhyme
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Location: on top of a snowflake freezing my booty off
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| Posted: Sun Sep 27 23:33:40 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: my dreams are better |
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Who's now wearing the mask?
maybe i should wear it now
but i have been real with you
so i really don't know how
i am true in myself
forgive me... i have to cough
this mask is a little stuck
can you help me get it off
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sapphicmuse
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| Posted: Wed Nov 4 13:37:27 EST 2009 Post subject: Re: my dreams are better |
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"Can you help me get it off?"
"Don't think so.
It's stuck on pretty tight.
You'd have better luck
trying to dig to China."
The cynic
puts down his beer,
and you extricate
yourself
without him.
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induce
"I'm not mad. I'm just PISSED OFF!"
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| Posted: Mon Dec 14 21:34:41 EST 2009 Post subject: Re: my dreams are better |
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without him
the masked
people wouldn't
fear
or
sing
songs about murder
n'
ballards & things....
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sapphicmuse
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| Posted: Tue Dec 15 8:54:52 EST 2009 Post subject: Re: my dreams are better |
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ballards & things...
isn't that the new store
on 33rd Street?
May be mistaken,
but the sign isn't.
I know what the sign says.
Time for my siesta.
It is December 15th,
1987 again.
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