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PostPosted: Mon Aug 17 2:07:19 EDT 2009    Post subject: my dreams are better Reply with quote

i want to breath midnight air
smell the sanded rains
but all i get is dirty filth
headaches and pains

dreams bring some comfort
so i long to close my eyes
daydreams are much better
as that part of me dies

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 17 14:47:37 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: my dreams are better Reply with quote

As that part of me dies,
inside I hear cries.
Reaching for what occupies
where the heart of me lies.

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 17 16:56:30 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: my dreams are better Reply with quote

where the heart of me lies
love it denies
with a heaviness of sighs
don't ask me why

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 19 23:13:50 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: my dreams are better Reply with quote

Do not ask me why
my dreams are better
for there, I fly
and never wander
for I am home
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 20 14:20:21 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: my dreams are better Reply with quote

for i am home
i am known
never alone
where wind is blown

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 21 14:05:36 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: my dreams are better Reply with quote

where wind is blown
I shiver, cold -
This unexpected motion sings alone
as silence drones.
Character building,
Or so I'm told.
Reverse construction,
Falling down,
This emptiness is getting old...
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 21 23:57:47 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: my dreams are better Reply with quote

This emptiness is getting old...
i think i am ready to fold
looking and listening
stars are glistening

wishing i could be a star
then i would be so far
you could see me
but never touch
don't you know
i miss you so much

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 22 17:32:47 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: my dreams are better Reply with quote

i miss you so much
you don't even know.
That's better, I think, but
this feeling, it only makes it stronger.
I don't know how much time,
Or even, how much longer
I can hold that feeling down.
The only one I can speak to is you,
But I can't tell you that, as such.
It hurts to see you, but hurting more
is the prospect of a world without
your smile. I miss you, but...
Silence is the only way to go.
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 22 21:11:15 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: my dreams are better Reply with quote

silence is the only way to go
for what else can i portray
i don't think you"ll believe me
no matter what i say

my actions will do the talking
because words do not phase you
so look me in my eyes sweetheart
and tell me what to do

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 23 21:44:44 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: my dreams are better Reply with quote

and tell me what to do
suped up colours
running
through
collide ah! scope eyes
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 1 21:33:45 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: my dreams are better Reply with quote

Kaleidoscope eyes
Collide and scope mine
as we approach
the winding images
before us.
My dreams are better
because they
all just came true.

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 1 21:51:11 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: my dreams are better Reply with quote

all just came true
as i looked at the sky
the wind was speaking
the clouds saying hi

telling me why they change
and sometimes cry
the raindrops tickle us
was their reply

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 1 22:02:46 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: my dreams are better Reply with quote

was their reply
they wouuldn't lie
What's in that pi?
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 5 15:00:12 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: my dreams are better Reply with quote

What's in that pi?
3.1415, what? why?

I would let you cry,
Before I let you hear
The numbers in pi.

And when you do cry,
I shall utter a sigh.
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 6 17:17:16 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: my dreams are better Reply with quote

I shall utter a sigh
face hidden by the night

I shall utter a sigh
that you should surrender your plight

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 6 22:20:06 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: my dreams are better Reply with quote

That you should surrender your plight,
Is for you to decide.
Whatever you may have done,
In my heart, you'll reside.
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 7 13:37:23 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: my dreams are better Reply with quote

In my heart you'll reside,
amid the slums of my heartaches.
The troll that dwells beneath the bridge,
between light and dark.
Below what holds me together,
is what once tore me apart.

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 8 13:17:18 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: my dreams are better Reply with quote

Is what once tore me apart,
The very thing you hold in your heart?
Dear, shake not my dreams today,
I do not have much to say.
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 9 8:58:17 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: my dreams are better Reply with quote

i do not have much to say
my actions are in my hands
causing water to spring
over desert lands

sleep is calling
still i'm falling
desperately crawling
trying to get to you

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 9 9:52:02 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: my dreams are better Reply with quote

Trying to get you,
I tripped on the few nails
Fallen on the grasslands.

Get away from me for now,
You have hurt me.
Sorry, come back that was
A momentous misery.
Honey, I'm sorry.
Come back to me.
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 9 12:06:01 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: my dreams are better Reply with quote

come back to me
i miss you so much
but i could really go without
your cold handed touch

i love how you make me feel
when you have good days
but until then
you can go away

Never mind please come back
do i have to beg?

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 10 11:36:22 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: my dreams are better Reply with quote

Do I have to beg?
To be free of this dark lust,
disguised as love's light.
It's because darkness keeps me warm,
in the light of snowy cold nights.
This heated grip holds tight.
Do I have to beg?
To be set free, or be let be.
That is the question that puzzles me.

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 10 12:03:03 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: my dreams are better Reply with quote

That is the question that puzzles me.
why eyes shut is my light
and have me almost blinded
my world seems so bright

i have listened to the wind
while it smacked me in my face
but even it doesn't have an answer
within this weird twisted place

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 10 13:15:14 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: my dreams are better Reply with quote

Within this weird twisted place,
Walking in what is almost a maze.
Cannot do anything better than this pace.
Within this weird twisted place,
On every wall, I can see my face.
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 10 22:01:29 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: my dreams are better Reply with quote

On every wall, I can see my face.
in a new exciting way
like a circus mirror
i think that im okay

now it's getting dizzy
i dont want to fall
can somebody help me
i dont want to fall

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