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angeroseblue Compares Alliteration, Assonance & Rhyme


 
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Posted: Mon Aug 17 2:07:19 EDT 2009 Post subject: my dreams are better |
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i want to breath midnight air
smell the sanded rains
but all i get is dirty filth
headaches and pains
dreams bring some comfort
so i long to close my eyes
daydreams are much better
as that part of me dies
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NoGoody Galileo is laughing at you from on high


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Posted: Mon Aug 17 14:47:37 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: my dreams are better |
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As that part of me dies,
inside I hear cries.
Reaching for what occupies
where the heart of me lies.
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angeroseblue Compares Alliteration, Assonance & Rhyme


 
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Posted: Mon Aug 17 16:56:30 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: my dreams are better |
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where the heart of me lies
love it denies
with a heaviness of sighs
don't ask me why
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Posted: Wed Aug 19 23:13:50 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: my dreams are better |
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Do not ask me why
my dreams are better
for there, I fly
and never wander
for I am home
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angeroseblue Compares Alliteration, Assonance & Rhyme


 
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Posted: Thu Aug 20 14:20:21 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: my dreams are better |
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for i am home
i am known
never alone
where wind is blown
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VillyTrebuchet Hey, my rank changed!


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Posted: Fri Aug 21 14:05:36 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: my dreams are better |
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where wind is blown
I shiver, cold -
This unexpected motion sings alone
as silence drones.
Character building,
Or so I'm told.
Reverse construction,
Falling down,
This emptiness is getting old...
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angeroseblue Compares Alliteration, Assonance & Rhyme


 
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Posted: Fri Aug 21 23:57:47 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: my dreams are better |
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This emptiness is getting old...
i think i am ready to fold
looking and listening
stars are glistening
wishing i could be a star
then i would be so far
you could see me
but never touch
don't you know
i miss you so much
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VillyTrebuchet Hey, my rank changed!


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Posted: Sat Aug 22 17:32:47 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: my dreams are better |
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i miss you so much
you don't even know.
That's better, I think, but
this feeling, it only makes it stronger.
I don't know how much time,
Or even, how much longer
I can hold that feeling down.
The only one I can speak to is you,
But I can't tell you that, as such.
It hurts to see you, but hurting more
is the prospect of a world without
your smile. I miss you, but...
Silence is the only way to go.
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angeroseblue Compares Alliteration, Assonance & Rhyme


 
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Posted: Sat Aug 22 21:11:15 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: my dreams are better |
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silence is the only way to go
for what else can i portray
i don't think you"ll believe me
no matter what i say
my actions will do the talking
because words do not phase you
so look me in my eyes sweetheart
and tell me what to do
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induce The first hundred years are the hardest


  
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Posted: Sun Aug 23 21:44:44 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: my dreams are better |
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and tell me what to do
suped up colours
running
through
collide ah! scope eyes
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NoGoody Galileo is laughing at you from on high


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Posted: Tue Sep 1 21:33:45 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: my dreams are better |
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Kaleidoscope eyes
Collide and scope mine
as we approach
the winding images
before us.
My dreams are better
because they
all just came true.
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angeroseblue Compares Alliteration, Assonance & Rhyme


 
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Posted: Tue Sep 1 21:51:11 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: my dreams are better |
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all just came true
as i looked at the sky
the wind was speaking
the clouds saying hi
telling me why they change
and sometimes cry
the raindrops tickle us
was their reply
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induce The first hundred years are the hardest


  
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Posted: Tue Sep 1 22:02:46 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: my dreams are better |
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was their reply
they wouuldn't lie
What's in that pi?
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T.E.D Has the Poetry Bug


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Posted: Sat Sep 5 15:00:12 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: my dreams are better |
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What's in that pi?
3.1415, what? why?
I would let you cry,
Before I let you hear
The numbers in pi.
And when you do cry,
I shall utter a sigh.
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Posted: Sun Sep 6 17:17:16 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: my dreams are better |
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I shall utter a sigh
face hidden by the night
I shall utter a sigh
that you should surrender your plight
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T.E.D Has the Poetry Bug


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Posted: Sun Sep 6 22:20:06 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: my dreams are better |
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That you should surrender your plight,
Is for you to decide.
Whatever you may have done,
In my heart, you'll reside.
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NoGoody Galileo is laughing at you from on high


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Posted: Mon Sep 7 13:37:23 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: my dreams are better |
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In my heart you'll reside,
amid the slums of my heartaches.
The troll that dwells beneath the bridge,
between light and dark.
Below what holds me together,
is what once tore me apart.
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Posted: Tue Sep 8 13:17:18 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: my dreams are better |
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Is what once tore me apart,
The very thing you hold in your heart?
Dear, shake not my dreams today,
I do not have much to say.
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angeroseblue Compares Alliteration, Assonance & Rhyme


 
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Posted: Wed Sep 9 8:58:17 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: my dreams are better |
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i do not have much to say
my actions are in my hands
causing water to spring
over desert lands
sleep is calling
still i'm falling
desperately crawling
trying to get to you
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Posted: Wed Sep 9 9:52:02 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: my dreams are better |
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Trying to get you,
I tripped on the few nails
Fallen on the grasslands.
Get away from me for now,
You have hurt me.
Sorry, come back that was
A momentous misery.
Honey, I'm sorry.
Come back to me.
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angeroseblue Compares Alliteration, Assonance & Rhyme


 
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Posted: Wed Sep 9 12:06:01 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: my dreams are better |
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come back to me
i miss you so much
but i could really go without
your cold handed touch
i love how you make me feel
when you have good days
but until then
you can go away
Never mind please come back
do i have to beg?
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NoGoody Galileo is laughing at you from on high


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Posted: Thu Sep 10 11:36:22 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: my dreams are better |
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Do I have to beg?
To be free of this dark lust,
disguised as love's light.
It's because darkness keeps me warm,
in the light of snowy cold nights.
This heated grip holds tight.
Do I have to beg?
To be set free, or be let be.
That is the question that puzzles me.
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angeroseblue Compares Alliteration, Assonance & Rhyme


 
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Posted: Thu Sep 10 12:03:03 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: my dreams are better |
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That is the question that puzzles me.
why eyes shut is my light
and have me almost blinded
my world seems so bright
i have listened to the wind
while it smacked me in my face
but even it doesn't have an answer
within this weird twisted place
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Posted: Thu Sep 10 13:15:14 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: my dreams are better |
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Within this weird twisted place,
Walking in what is almost a maze.
Cannot do anything better than this pace.
Within this weird twisted place,
On every wall, I can see my face.
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angeroseblue Compares Alliteration, Assonance & Rhyme


 
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Posted: Thu Sep 10 22:01:29 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: my dreams are better |
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On every wall, I can see my face.
in a new exciting way
like a circus mirror
i think that im okay
now it's getting dizzy
i dont want to fall
can somebody help me
i dont want to fall
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