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PostPosted: Fri Nov 20 14:04:18 EST 2009    Post subject: Helix Creed Reply with quote





Guide on the single strand
Churning through the fray

Twisting for what may
Assess this helping hand

Cast into this mold
Grown out of empty space

As entities of grace
Trace time of our desire

Grow onward to design
Climb upward to divine

Take something of this life
Apart from conscious mind

Crawl out among the stars
Gold goblets in your eyes

Ask of them your place
To spread these wings and fly

Give to those a name
Composed in lullabies

Twice as clear as sight
And half the fettered lies

Clearly we have tried
Grossly we have failed

Almost made it through
To stain away the trail

Gone now are those names
Charted out and mapped

Their purpose we have lost
All meaning we have sapped

Cold senses we betray
Good reasons we dispense

All these lives we waste
Trapped in this dissidence

Gapping holes to fill
Collapsing in the dark

Those days are now behind
Ahead are days to mark

Guide on the single strand
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Trace time of our desire
Grown out of empty space

Crawl out among the stars
Ask of them your place

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 21 0:24:27 EST 2009    Post subject: Re: Helix Creed Reply with quote

X-cellent. I have to read it again.

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 21 9:43:30 EST 2009    Post subject: Re: Helix Creed Reply with quote

Breathtaking, MnP! Please submit it here: cleavepoetry.wordpress.com/

Please?! Love it love love it, and not just because of the form.

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 21 14:02:38 EST 2009    Post subject: Re: Helix Creed Reply with quote

Xtremely glad to hear you liked it mamta, thanks for the read.

Teech - It does my muse good to hear that. I will take a look at that website and see about submitting it. I do not have plans to attempt at publishing my work in the future but I would like to create as little red tape as possible if I do. Honored though that you would ask me to submit it, do you have some poems on there?

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 21 21:37:37 EST 2009    Post subject: Re: Helix Creed Reply with quote

MnP, it is a Webzine. I am quite sure this will be accepted. I have several published there. I am also the person on charge of cleavegeneration, for kids. Although no one ever goes there... Rolling Eyes

I encourage you to submit this there. P-T Diep will like it.

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