| Order | Title | Comment | Date | Rating | | Reads | Comments |
 01 | |  Your words......thank you.definehaikuformeplease. thank youWHMechem. | 2009-11-21 01:09:05 | 1 |   | 15 | 2 |
| 02 | | A nice image of seasons' transition. Well done. | 2009-11-21 01:08:04 | 1 | | 45 | 4 |
| 03 | | G'day Rory...
I really enjoy reading a well structured rhyming poem Rory, and this sonnet of yours is terrific mate. It has a pleasant meloncholy sigh of growing older.
Thanks mate
Lindsay | 2009-11-21 01:02:32 | 1 | | 47 | 9 |
| 04 | | The 5 line format might be an obstacle for some readers, but your selection of precise vocabuary and the economy of words contribute to a very insightful haiku. Well done. | 2009-11-21 01:00:55 | 1 | | 15 | 2 |
| 05 | | Some suggestions: "beaming" instead of "gleaming", and in line 3 "all" sounds redundent. Your call, of course. | 2009-11-21 00:56:13 | 1 | | 19 | 2 |
| 06 | | G'day Conor...
You've produced a story here Conor that just adds to the frustration on the futility of war and the heartbreak it offers. These wars are all funded by taxpayers yet the taxpayer has no say and the taxpayer stands in the front line. When are we going to learn?
Thank you Conor.
Lindsay | 2009-11-21 00:55:50 | 1 | | 205 | 20 |
| 07 | | Y2F,
I take offense... My 88 was no jello mold! Maybe a sardine can. We got a bit cramped in the back seat. As for your ku, it's OK. Not many of us OF's around to know the difference. | 2009-11-21 00:52:24 | 1 | | 20 | 2 |
| 08 | | :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
you got me laughing now :twisted: :twisted:
thanks for reading | 2009-11-21 00:47:16 | 1 | | 115 | 14 |
| 09 | | thanks Jess
so glad you liked it!! :D :D | 2009-11-21 00:46:21 | 1 | | | |
| 10 | | thank you for reading
:D :D | 2009-11-21 00:45:22 | 1 | | 134 | 17 |
| 11 | | G'day Conor...
You've done a marvelous job here Conor with the chilling thoughts of those final minutes.
Well done mate.
Lindsay | 2009-11-21 00:40:35 | 1 | | 157 | 17 |
| 12 | | I share the same opinion Jenna. Powerful write, how can we get this put into some sort of universal law?
Dave | 2009-11-21 00:39:55 | 1 | | 26 | 2 |
| 13 | | Thanks, I don't think people realize how hard it is to write these. | 2009-11-21 00:23:18 | 1 | | 16 | 2 |
| 14 | | Demon.....thanks :wink: | 2009-11-20 23:56:46 | 1 | | 11 | 3 |
| 15 | | Thanks Dr. D 8) | 2009-11-20 23:55:56 | 1 | | | |
| 16 | | this is excellent blondie...so well done :) | 2009-11-20 23:46:42 | 1 | | | |
| 17 | | absolute wowser. very impressive,MNP. | 2009-11-20 23:41:18 | 1 | | 4 | 1 |
| 18 | | Wow is my face red :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops:. | 2009-11-20 23:40:22 | 1 | | 151 | 4 |
| 19 | | You certainly do have a way with words. 100 easy | 2009-11-20 23:35:49 | 1 | | 134 | 17 |
| 20 | | very nice. | 2009-11-20 23:32:54 | 1 | | 33 | 5 |
| 21 | | I listened to your audio poem first and then read this one, so I'm turned on and afraid at the same time. 1oo easy. Bless | 2009-11-20 23:30:07 | 1 | | 115 | 14 |
| 22 | | nicely written | 2009-11-20 23:24:36 | 1 | | 217 | 3 |
| 23 | | this is cute.... | 2009-11-20 23:20:38 | 1 | | 76 | 2 |
| 24 | | The is simply awesome my friend.
Disfrazada | 2009-11-20 23:18:50 | 1 | | 12 | 2 |
| 25 | | I love this Mysteri. Be well my friend.
Disfrazada | 2009-11-20 23:16:18 | 1 | | 13 | 1 |
| 26 | | Another [b]Outstanding[/b] write Steph. [i]Just for you... I used your word[/i] :wink: .
Regards,
Disfrazada :wink: | 2009-11-20 23:13:11 | 1 | | 70 | 9 |
| 27 | | This is beautiful Blondie. Take care my friend.
Disfrazada | 2009-11-20 22:59:36 | 1 | | 11 | 3 |
| 28 | | The is awesome nerdgirl... love the rhyme scheme. Pedophiles deserve this and so much worse :twisted: :twisted: . Take care my friend.
Disfrazada | 2009-11-20 22:55:56 | 1 | | 26 | 2 |
| 29 | | lmao. Great comment i give you a 10. | 2009-11-20 22:39:22 | 1 | | 16 | 2 |
| 30 | | keepin that shit real 12...the poet can be the most unpredictable psychopath around...it ain't always 'love and butterflies'.......be well man..qaj | 2009-11-20 22:36:15 | 1 | | | |
| 31 | | yes, music our sacred friend..a grand tribute..qaj | 2009-11-20 22:34:01 | 1 | | 11 | 2 |
| 32 | | good advice my friend...great delivery of such a Truth:) qaj | 2009-11-20 22:31:45 | 1 | | 13 | 1 |
| 33 | | may seem cliche for me to say..but your inner strength seems like it's keeping you from breaking..the feeling of being lost could possibly be the absence of such a realization...and many do break...stay strong nerdy g..qaj | 2009-11-20 22:30:35 | 1 | | 41 | 6 |
| 34 | | well done..qaj | 2009-11-20 22:27:35 | 1 | | 245 | 2 |
| 35 | | healthy addiction, i like it...kinda like the drunk switching to coffee...not that overconsumption of coffee is better..ah shit you know what i mean:) qaj | 2009-11-20 22:25:51 | 1 | | 52 | 6 |
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