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Poems - Coming and Going

Coming and Going

by Hambone

early morning stroll
old whore stumbles on her youth
life was pretty then

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Re: Coming and Going (Score: 1 )
by mamta on Wednesday, November 18, 2009 (13:35:22)

i liked this a lot. the past and the present .

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Re: Coming and Going by Hambone on Wednesday, November 18

Re: Coming and Going (Score: 1 )
by wildbrushfire on Wednesday, November 18, 2009 (23:13:45)

That is sad. The changes we go through in life. If we could just take the best moment in our life and relive it time and time again.

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Re: Coming and Going (Score: 1 )
by kinda on Thursday, November 19, 2009 (03:09:16)

So surreal in very few words...excellent.

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Re: Coming and Going (Score: 1 )
by danielouis on Thursday, November 19, 2009 (16:41:30)

good writing.

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Re: Coming and Going (Score: 1 )
by Tiku on Friday, November 20, 2009 (13:05:17)

short and meaningful

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Re: Coming and Going by Hambone on Monday, November 23

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