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Your relief a tidal wave, you almost drowned me...

by radical_love

It was just one of those things,
A could have been, a would have been-
Walking off the curb, back facing the street
All i saw was the alarm of your face
All i felt was the sudden pressure
Your arms pulling me away from that
Roaring Rush-
That filled my ears as i reached the pavement,
Just in time.

Another near miss,
Another one of my cat lives gone-
I think i've only got about three left now....

But you, were worse-
That look on your face,
The panic sobs that followed-
So what, i almost died-
In my life its a common occurrence.

But i guess you don't know that yet,
After all- it was only a first date.




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