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Poems - When I am naked
| | When I am nakedby Lyla
You watch a moon rise
only to fall asleep
You wait to hear birds sing
only to ignore it
and now
like all things complicated
and simple
you waste beauty
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watch your typing.
(Score: 1 )
by Mayo on Tuesday, January 23, 2007 (22:55:55) |
watch your typing. but beautiful.
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Spare and evocative.
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by RZS on Tuesday, May 01, 2007 (10:04:43) |
Spare and evocative. This one will stay with me.
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That's deep man!
Sh
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by oldschooldetroit on Friday, May 04, 2007 (15:33:49) |
That's deep man!
Short, sweet, to the point, & all too true!
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Good idea here. We a
(Score: 1 )
by J-Love on Tuesday, May 29, 2007 (16:27:14) |
Good idea here. We are all so wasteful, every day of our lives.
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So true, these words
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by induce on Sunday, June 03, 2007 (13:03:22) |
So true, these words aligned as they are speak volumes, beauty is wasted.
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beautiful write
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by PoeticTerrorist on Monday, July 16, 2007 (20:32:44) |
beautiful write
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This poem is excelle
(Score: 1 )
by Lore on Tuesday, August 07, 2007 (01:14:06) |
This poem is excellent.
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beautiful
(Score: 1 )
by BellaRed83 on Tuesday, August 07, 2007 (18:07:11) |
beautiful
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thank you
(Score: 1 )
by MermaidRosmerta on Saturday, August 11, 2007 (21:04:52) |
thank you
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what a terrible thin
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by phantazma on Saturday, August 25, 2007 (14:33:18) |
what a terrible thing, waste is! I like how you reminded us of things to be savored. Few words, big thought!
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Short and impressing
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by mohsen-b on Sunday, August 26, 2007 (16:02:54) |
Short and impressing...
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theres not one time
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by dilutedjoy on Tuesday, August 28, 2007 (01:42:33) |
theres not one time that i come onto this site and read this poem at least 3 times before leaving...beautiful
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Dear Nike_A_Gogo
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by silent_lotus on Tuesday, August 28, 2007 (08:36:14) |
Dear Nike_A_Gogo
The honest simplicity of this poem
is a beautiful authenticity.
a warm smile
silent lotus
"Before there were heroes...there was peace." ....... silent lotus
www.silentlotus.net
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good shot of moment!
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by jaan_RR on Sunday, September 09, 2007 (10:06:34) |
good shot of moment!
RR
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I like the truth you
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by spence on Wednesday, September 26, 2007 (21:22:34) |
I like the truth you speak of taking things for granted,
nice write
spence
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I thought this poem
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by Luz_Aradia on Thursday, September 27, 2007 (13:36:22) |
I thought this poem was nice and interesting but I think you tell instead of show us at the end. It is obvious but the discriptions that this person doesn't appreciate the beauty in life, show this by the discriptions you give in the previous lines instead of telling us what we can already observe. Just a thought, this was a nice one though.
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this is one of the m
(Score: 1 )
by ocuana on Thursday, October 04, 2007 (11:49:10) |
this is one of the most perfect poems I have read.
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Very nicely done. Si
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by TuscanQueen on Thursday, October 11, 2007 (17:02:51) |
Very nicely done. Simple. You use the words to their benefit and don't rely on gimmicks
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That was really good
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by Doug22cal on Wednesday, October 24, 2007 (00:00:36) |
That was really good!
Doug
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Nicely done. I can s
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by fallenpoet on Friday, October 26, 2007 (11:01:11) |
Nicely done. I can see why this poem is so popular. It's hard to put so much meaning into such a short poem, but you did it well.
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Awesome writing.
Th
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by Ramonez on Monday, November 05, 2007 (08:38:33) |
Awesome writing.
Thanks for that.
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good
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by ht4jpc on Saturday, November 17, 2007 (20:21:25) |
good
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i love this poem. G
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by Mustilovehim911 on Sunday, November 25, 2007 (16:08:44) |
i love this poem. Great job.
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Nice Stuff. A superb
(Score: 1 )
by FireFly747 on Friday, December 07, 2007 (01:16:29) |
Nice Stuff. A superbly written poem with beauty and simplicity. Poem sings with resonance. Poem possesses bold colors and bright tones. Your words painted a lovely masterpiece. Please stop by to read some poetry and tell a friend too. Keep sharing.
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What a lovely poem.
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by solosaria on Saturday, January 12, 2008 (02:45:37) |
What a lovely poem. I liked your simple images and the unpretentious tone. Very nice.
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very true to life
w
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by tash on Wednesday, January 16, 2008 (19:38:10) |
very true to life
we ignore simple beauty, and just try and maximise being well of - material wise.
your poem was short and sweet and you truly adopted the less is more theory. brilliant 
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Very nice, I cannot
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by Noden on Thursday, January 17, 2008 (21:37:37) |
Very nice, I cannot be a critic, cause I for one just started myself, but I love the sharing
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very cool
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by BobDawg509 on Monday, February 04, 2008 (03:33:23) |
very cool
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I gave it an 8 becau
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by Mello on Sunday, June 01, 2008 (03:04:59) |
I gave it an 8 because I don't quite get the meaning of it. It's there, though, almost but elusive (the meaning) sorry I'm apparently too lazy too look at the comments. It sounds soooo go I like it even with out the meaning.
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Thought it was nice.
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by EGranholm on Wednesday, October 15, 2008 (14:13:19) |
Thought it was nice. I enjoy the short ones, like a breath of fresh air, however I did not exactly grasp the meaning of it either?
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The poem seems very
(Score: 1 )
by MidnightPoet on Sunday, October 26, 2008 (02:15:24) |
The poem seems very clear to me. It is sad how some people are so unaware or become so accustomed to beauty that they fail to see it. Whatever form it may come in.
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i love how simply yo
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by plasticity on Saturday, November 08, 2008 (15:27:47) |
i love how simply you put so many emotions. in just a few words.
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it is a beautiful po
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by Bogeyman on Sunday, March 22, 2009 (00:47:47) |
it is a beautiful poem; however one part feels like it doesn't belong there:
like all things complicated
and simple
have no idea what these words refer to; otherwise, very nice!
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So sad Lyla? Jon
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by schlegel on Wednesday, April 01, 2009 (22:47:37) |
So sad Lyla? Jon
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so much emotion.. lo
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by lipgloss on Saturday, June 06, 2009 (22:25:02) |
so much emotion.. love it
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Re: When I am naked
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by A-Town on Friday, July 10, 2009 (05:50:34) |
You truly have a gift in the written word. Beautifully composed! I'll be sure to read more of work. If this poem is any indication of your writing I know I won't be disappointed.
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Re: When I am naked
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by SOUTHAFRICANWINE on Tuesday, August 18, 2009 (13:55:26) |
Lyla
Very beautiful. So simplistic but very powerful
Please also read my poem " My Friend"
Regards
SOUTHAFRICANWINE
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Re: When I am naked
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by Coma.White on Wednesday, September 02, 2009 (15:40:07) |
There's something catchy about that...liked it! <3
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Re: When I am naked
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by Anonnimus on Sunday, September 06, 2009 (19:43:39) |
holy crap all those comments
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Re: When I am naked
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by mlkyy on Monday, September 21, 2009 (22:14:24) |
Gee Lyla, u make me see things which i'm not supposed to see! :)It is beautiful.
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