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Poems - danceing with death

danceing with death

by thomas2.0

bring the violence its very important for what i want to do to you

now we swing at each other no longer side by side

as the red hot sparks fly in all directions they have called it the dance of death

look at what we have become animals to each other and we were once brothers

as i look down at you i start to cry and i think why did we have to fight till one of our deaths

for now i dwell in my mind danceing with your death

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Re: danceing with death (Score: 1 )
by sschubert on Wednesday, October 14, 2009 (15:56:22)

WOW - this is incredible - I LOVED IT!

Stpeh

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Re: danceing with death by thomas2.0 on Monday, October 19

Re: danceing with death (Score: 1 )
by Izmeiah on Thursday, October 15, 2009 (06:58:39)

I don't know what you were going for here. Did you mean "brothers?" instead of bothers?

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Re: danceing with death by thomas2.0 on Monday, October 19

Re: danceing with death (Score: 1 )
by angeroseblue on Tuesday, October 20, 2009 (23:31:53)

Wow
this was a emotional poem for me
fighting until one dies
wow
Shocked

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Re: danceing with death (Score: 1 )
by poetlost on Wednesday, November 04, 2009 (00:53:56)

i like what you were trying to say. i think you could use punctuation to make your point better and improve your poem's flow.

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