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Haiku: Venus Flytrap

by thewholesoul

no fly zone
where hungry hugs trans-plant
a kiss of death






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Re: Haiku: Venus Flytrap (Score: 1 )
by Disfrazada on Monday, November 02, 2009 (15:19:39)
Outstanding my friend. Best wishes.


Re: Haiku: Venus Flytrap (Score: 1 )
by angeroseblue on Monday, November 02, 2009 (15:37:25)
i love the use of transplant in this haiku
another awesome write
conor
Very Happy Very Happy

    Re: Haiku: Venus Flytrap (Score: 1 )
    by thewholesoul on Monday, November 02, 2009 (18:30:13)
    cheers libby, i was undecided between either "[in]plant" or "transplant" and i opted for the latter. thanks very much for the read and kind words. best wishes, conor


Re: Haiku: Venus Flytrap (Score: 1 )
by Dreaming-Demon on Monday, November 02, 2009 (18:27:49)
This ones awsome, well done conor!

    Re: Haiku: Venus Flytrap (Score: 1 )
    by thewholesoul on Monday, November 02, 2009 (18:31:21)
    cheers D, very much appreciated. take good care.
    conor


Re: Haiku: Venus Flytrap (Score: 1 )
by WordLover on Monday, November 02, 2009 (19:59:18)
This is terrific! Love the picture too.
Sandy

    Re: Haiku: Venus Flytrap (Score: 1 )
    by thewholesoul on Monday, November 02, 2009 (20:01:46)
    thanks very much sandy. adding a picture to haiku seems to be a new trend going around. a bit of eye candy never hurts i suppose. take care, conor


Re: Haiku: Venus Flytrap (Score: 1 )
by Liquid_Chaos on Monday, November 02, 2009 (20:16:47)
Very descriptive is few words, well written. L_C

    Re: Haiku: Venus Flytrap (Score: 1 )
    by thewholesoul on Monday, November 02, 2009 (20:29:53)
    thanks L c - your comments are always appreciated. take it easy, conor.


Re: Haiku: Venus Flytrap (Score: 1 )
by nerdgirl on Tuesday, November 03, 2009 (10:04:53)
Love it! I used to have one of those. I dont have a hand for plants though, I think I am the only person who can manage to kill a cactus. LOL

    Re: Haiku: Venus Flytrap (Score: 1 )
    by thewholesoul on Tuesday, November 03, 2009 (10:08:15)
    LOL - i killed a cactus aswell. and i'd love to have one of those venus flytraps cos i hate flies! take care, conor


Re: Haiku: Venus Flytrap (Score: 1 )
by CRUSH-247 on Tuesday, November 03, 2009 (19:01:42)
A great job on this conor...Very cool!!!!

    Re: Haiku: Venus Flytrap (Score: 1 )
    by thewholesoul on Tuesday, November 03, 2009 (19:17:04)
    cheers mick - and thanks so much for dropping in.


Re: Haiku: Venus Flytrap (Score: 1 )
by scriptum on Tuesday, November 03, 2009 (23:19:21)
"No fly zone." What a perfect way to start the 'ku.

    Re: Haiku: Venus Flytrap (Score: 1 )
    by thewholesoul on Wednesday, November 04, 2009 (06:21:05)
    cheers scriptum - i had a bit of fun with ths one. take good care, me dear



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