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Poems - Haiku: Venus Flytrap
| | Haiku: Venus Flytrapby thewholesoul
no fly zone
where hungry hugs trans-plant
a kiss of death
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Re: Haiku: Venus Flytrap
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by Disfrazada on Monday, November 02, 2009 (15:19:39) |
Outstanding my friend. Best wishes.
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Re: Haiku: Venus Flytrap
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by thewholesoul on Monday, November 02, 2009 (15:22:44) |
thanks very much D. take good care.
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Re: Haiku: Venus Flytrap
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by angeroseblue on Monday, November 02, 2009 (15:37:25) |
i love the use of transplant in this haiku
another awesome write
conor
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Re: Haiku: Venus Flytrap
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by thewholesoul on Monday, November 02, 2009 (18:30:13) |
cheers libby, i was undecided between either "[in]plant" or "transplant" and i opted for the latter. thanks very much for the read and kind words. best wishes, conor
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Re: Haiku: Venus Flytrap
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by Dreaming-Demon on Monday, November 02, 2009 (18:27:49) |
This ones awsome, well done conor!
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Re: Haiku: Venus Flytrap
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by thewholesoul on Monday, November 02, 2009 (18:31:21) |
cheers D, very much appreciated. take good care.
conor
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Re: Haiku: Venus Flytrap
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by WordLover on Monday, November 02, 2009 (19:59:18) |
This is terrific! Love the picture too.
Sandy
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Re: Haiku: Venus Flytrap
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by thewholesoul on Monday, November 02, 2009 (20:01:46) |
thanks very much sandy. adding a picture to haiku seems to be a new trend going around. a bit of eye candy never hurts i suppose. take care, conor
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Re: Haiku: Venus Flytrap
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by Liquid_Chaos on Monday, November 02, 2009 (20:16:47) |
Very descriptive is few words, well written. L_C
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Re: Haiku: Venus Flytrap
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by thewholesoul on Monday, November 02, 2009 (20:29:53) |
thanks L c - your comments are always appreciated. take it easy, conor.
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Re: Haiku: Venus Flytrap
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by nerdgirl on Tuesday, November 03, 2009 (10:04:53) |
Love it! I used to have one of those. I dont have a hand for plants though, I think I am the only person who can manage to kill a cactus. LOL
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Re: Haiku: Venus Flytrap
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by thewholesoul on Tuesday, November 03, 2009 (10:08:15) |
LOL - i killed a cactus aswell. and i'd love to have one of those venus flytraps cos i hate flies! take care, conor
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Re: Haiku: Venus Flytrap
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by CRUSH-247 on Tuesday, November 03, 2009 (19:01:42) |
A great job on this conor...Very cool!!!!
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Re: Haiku: Venus Flytrap
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by thewholesoul on Tuesday, November 03, 2009 (19:17:04) |
cheers mick - and thanks so much for dropping in.
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Re: Haiku: Venus Flytrap
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by scriptum on Tuesday, November 03, 2009 (23:19:21) |
"No fly zone." What a perfect way to start the 'ku.
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Re: Haiku: Venus Flytrap
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by thewholesoul on Wednesday, November 04, 2009 (06:21:05) |
cheers scriptum - i had a bit of fun with ths one. take good care, me dear
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