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Poems - Plain-Crazy

Plain-Crazy

by Twelve

Am i just plain crazy just plain insane
just plain tired of dealing with the pain.
Heartache inside my minds eye is at tears
and i thought you would be the one to make all the years
seem insignificant in the face of significance
silly me to think that she could bring me deliverance
Misery i know well and close like in horseshoes
I wonder what you think. would like to take a walk in your shoes
I needed you and you felt that that would never work out
can't help the fact that i'm so hurt now.
Let me suppress the agitation and just move on with life
Look to the heavens and pray for Noa Light.
That's what i get for creating and ideal in mind.
I'm just plain crazy. But she's so damn fine.

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Re: Plain-Crazy (Score: 1 )
by sschubert on Wednesday, November 04, 2009 (01:42:57)

HMMM - being plain crazy sucks HUH - it's like the universe plays a joke on you whenever you "THINK" you are in love - or maybe not even that - maybe the joke is in attachment that mere fact that one might just get plain attached - damn that knocks the wind out of you - doesn't it?

ANYWAY....................

AGAIN -

soooooooooo well done - I relate to your style - your subject - and probably should study your work further - in the interest of self improvement - of course!

Have a GREAT night!!!!!

Steph

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Re: Plain-Crazy by Twelve on Wednesday, November 04

Re: Plain-Crazy (Score: 1 )
by nerdgirl on Wednesday, November 04, 2009 (17:25:28)

welcome to GP. I really enjoyed this. I like your style.

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Re: Plain-Crazy (Score: 1 )
by plasticity on Wednesday, November 04, 2009 (21:19:26)

Love this line: "seem insignificant in the face of significance" a good piece with over whelming emotions. good job, my new friend =)

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Re: Plain-Crazy by Twelve on Wednesday, November 04

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