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Maybe if I Do It This Way

by angeroseblue

drew my heart
added wings
she took the wings
and flew

put directions in the
center
so she could get to
you

so if she lands in your
hands
know it's meant to be

hoping someone's
heart out there
is searching just for
me





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Re: Maybe if I Do It This Way (Score: 1 )
by Disfrazada on Thursday, November 05, 2009 (10:35:57)
Beautiful Libby. Best wishes.

    Re: Maybe if I Do It This Way (Score: 1 )
    by angeroseblue on Thursday, November 05, 2009 (23:42:08)
    Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
    thanks Disfrazada
    glad you read it Very Happy Very Happy


Re: Maybe if I Do It This Way (Score: 1 )
by nerdgirl on Thursday, November 05, 2009 (10:52:48)
aaaaw, this is soooo sweet! Imagine you would find the counterpart to this poem? That would be awesome!

    Re: Maybe if I Do It This Way (Score: 1 )
    by angeroseblue on Thursday, November 05, 2009 (23:43:07)
    thanks nerdy
    and if i did ....
    knowing the fact that they write poetry...
    i would be pleased Wink Very Happy Very Happy


Re: Maybe if I Do It This Way (Score: 1 )
by rcfirerescue on Thursday, November 05, 2009 (12:44:36)
Wow, what an all around sweet poem. Nice job, really gets to my feminine side.... hmhmmm... Did I just say that out loud, I meant I felt nothing...At all.lol.
RJ

    Re: Maybe if I Do It This Way (Score: 1 )
    by nerdgirl on Thursday, November 05, 2009 (18:35:02)
    sorry but Laughing Laughing Laughing
    youre still Cool

    Re: Maybe if I Do It This Way (Score: 1 )
    by angeroseblue on Friday, November 06, 2009 (00:00:00)
    thank you
    and as long as....you felt nothing Laughing Laughing Laughing


Re: Maybe if I Do It This Way (Score: 1 )
by questionajourney on Thursday, November 05, 2009 (17:47:38)
it's hard to rest, assured of this....let the butterflies play and give you hope of the unknown future..q

    Re: Maybe if I Do It This Way (Score: 1 )
    by angeroseblue on Friday, November 06, 2009 (00:01:02)
    i love your comments q
    thanks so much Very Happy Very Happy


Re: Maybe if I Do It This Way (Score: 1 )
by sschubert on Thursday, November 05, 2009 (18:08:26)
OMG - ME TOOOOOOO!!!! But sssshhhhhhh don't tell anyone

This is one of my favorite poems!!!

XOXOXO

Steph Cool

    Re: Maybe if I Do It This Way (Score: 1 )
    by angeroseblue on Friday, November 06, 2009 (00:01:59)
    your secret is safe with me
    promise
    and thanks for reading steph Very Happy Very Happy


Re: Maybe if I Do It This Way (Score: 1 )
by thewholesoul on Thursday, November 05, 2009 (20:15:15)
wow libby i'm lovin your poetry tonight. very well done again. such a beautiful little write. take care, conor

    Re: Maybe if I Do It This Way (Score: 1 )
    by angeroseblue on Friday, November 06, 2009 (00:02:35)
    thanks conor
    so glad you enjoyed them
    Very Happy Very Happy


Re: Maybe if I Do It This Way (Score: 1 )
by KatiraMahsa on Thursday, November 05, 2009 (20:55:53)
Lovely!


Re: Maybe if I Do It This Way (Score: 1 )
by badmalthus on Thursday, November 05, 2009 (23:22:53)
Someone once said that the heart is a lonely hunter.........poignant piece Libby.
Harry

    Re: Maybe if I Do It This Way (Score: 1 )
    by angeroseblue on Friday, November 06, 2009 (00:08:47)
    whoever said this had a lot of wisdom
    thanks for reading


Re: Maybe if I Do It This Way (Score: 1 )
by plasticity on Friday, November 06, 2009 (14:53:43)
simple and beautiful.

    Re: Maybe if I Do It This Way (Score: 1 )
    by angeroseblue on Friday, November 06, 2009 (20:59:27)
    well thank you plasticity
    glad you liked it


Re: Maybe if I Do It This Way (Score: 1 )
by Dreaming-Demon on Saturday, November 07, 2009 (02:55:46)
Beautiful

    Re: Maybe if I Do It This Way (Score: 1 )
    by angeroseblue on Saturday, November 07, 2009 (16:19:24)
    awww
    dreaming thank you so much Very Happy

      Re: Maybe if I Do It This Way (Score: 1 )
      by cmiamigal on Sunday, November 08, 2009 (14:36:09)
      This is beyond beautiful!!! Wonderful write Libby!!!

      Keep hope, love, and faith alive
      -Christie

        Re: Maybe if I Do It This Way (Score: 1 )
        by angeroseblue on Monday, November 09, 2009 (07:33:35)
        thanks Christie
        glad you liked it!!! Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy


Re: Maybe if I Do It This Way (Score: 1 )
by A-Town on Wednesday, November 11, 2009 (13:37:57)
Beautiful words, I could not stop myself from coming back and reading this several times

    Re: Maybe if I Do It This Way (Score: 1 )
    by angeroseblue on Wednesday, November 11, 2009 (22:12:51)
    Shocked Shocked
    woooow
    thank you A town
    for that lovely compliment and comment
    so nice of you



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