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Poems - a better world

a better world

by nerdgirl

The world will change; war will end
the economy will Boom
pollution will no longer be a problem
and every person will have a home and food

People will stop hating and show love
children will be safe and well taken care of

Drugs will be of the past
and deseases will be cured
violence will be no more
and noone will have "dead bodies"
hidden under their floor

The world will change, its up to us
we arent doing anything;
instead... we fuss

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Re: a better world (Score: 1 )
by questionajourney on Saturday, November 07, 2009 (17:42:55)

when optimism dies...we all die..this world needs people like you to point out the universal hope many still do feel..good one nerdy g..q

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Re: a better world by nerdgirl on Saturday, November 07

Re: a better world (Score: 1 )
by WordLover on Saturday, November 07, 2009 (17:53:51)

nerdgirl - all of this is so true - and you state it all so well. If only more would listen.

Sandy

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Re: a better world by nerdgirl on Saturday, November 07

Re: a better world (Score: 1 )
by Zbird on Saturday, November 07, 2009 (19:58:12)

your poem speaks to the truth and also to the heart of the problem. when good men do nothing....

don't forget to join Melly's sock hop slam! should be great fun! read the comments first as it has a twist Smile

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Re: a better world by nerdgirl on Saturday, November 07

Re: a better world (Score: 1 )
by shazza on Saturday, November 07, 2009 (20:39:49)

The only word I seem to be saying today is wow lol so here it is hun WOW
Take care
Shazza x

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Re: a better world by nerdgirl on Saturday, November 07

Re: a better world (Score: 1 )
by Liquid_Chaos on Saturday, November 07, 2009 (21:01:57)

So true, nice write! L_C

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Re: a better world by nerdgirl on Saturday, November 07

Re: a better world (Score: 1 )
by Dreaming-Demon on Saturday, November 07, 2009 (23:14:46)

Very true...I suppose i should clean out under my floor...that would be a start...no seriously great poem

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Re: a better world by nerdgirl on Saturday, November 07

Re: a better world (Score: 1 )
by badmalthus on Sunday, November 08, 2009 (00:23:00)

Got to have a little hope NG........damn fine write.
Cheers.........Harry

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Re: a better world by nerdgirl on Sunday, November 08

Re: a better world (Score: 1 )
by CRUSH-247 on Sunday, November 08, 2009 (07:59:38)

Too AWESOME nerdgirl...I have a glass floor,BTW...Write on!!!

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Re: a better world by nerdgirl on Sunday, November 08

Re: a better world (Score: 1 )
by thewholesoul on Sunday, November 08, 2009 (16:37:06)

well said jenna. i just change the world starting with myself. take care

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Re: a better world (Score: 1 )
by rondo on Sunday, November 08, 2009 (19:05:16)

A strong forray into social conscience ....excellent piece...rondo

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Re: a better world by nerdgirl on Monday, November 09

Re: a better world (Score: 1 )
by radical_love on Monday, November 09, 2009 (04:26:05)

AHHHH the frustration!!!!! at you, me and everybody. it is US that's the problem....this poem- was absolutely outstanding...it showed the future- IF WE DO SOME SERIOUS THINGS ABOUT THESE ISSUES NOW~!
fuss.......
that's all we are.
a bunch of hypocritical whingers.
how depressing.
let's do something!!!!!!!

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Re: a better world by nerdgirl on Monday, November 09

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by angeroseblue on Monday, November 09, 2009 (09:33:43)

i thought i had already rated this
but from me to you
10
this is well done
damn near political

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Re: a better world by nerdgirl on Monday, November 09

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