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Poems - iN vEiN

iN vEiN

by Disfrazada

HeLLo My frIenD… we’Re hEre aGaIn,
yOur niGhtmarE dOes nOt haVe aN enD,
wHy doN’t yOu just aCCepT ouR bIrTh…
tHis iS YoUr liTTle heLL oN eArtH .

“I pray dear lord please rescue me,
Cleanse my soul and set me free,
I’ve stepped into a place of hell,
Where apparitions and these voices dwell,
Rebuke them now… that I can see,
There’s still some light that’s left in me”.

YoU pRay for liGht… buT wE’re stIll hEre,
We sNickEr at YouR fEEble prAyErs,
CAn’t tUrn us ofF…wE’re nOt a sWitch,
YOuR miNd is ours… You PatHeTic biTch;
sO tAke tHis giFt aNd dOn’T RefUse,
wE’ll sOOn beCoMe yOuR grEateSt mUse.

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Re: iN vAiN (Score: 1 )
by Craigd741 on Friday, November 20, 2009 (16:59:41)

Quite simply - awesome!

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Re: iN vAiN (Score: 1 )
by Disfrazada on Friday, November 20, 2009 (17:13:20)

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Re: iN vAiN (Score: 1 )
by WordLover on Friday, November 20, 2009 (17:22:58)

I agree with Craig - this is simply - awesome!!

Sandy

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Re: iN vAiN (Score: 1 )
by Disfrazada on Monday, November 23, 2009 (12:45:35)

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Re: iN vEiN (Score: 1 )
by angeroseblue on Friday, November 20, 2009 (22:46:29)

this is awesome disfrazada
i love the turmoil an the pathetic bitch line
don't ask me why
i just do!!! Twisted Evil

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Re: iN vEiN (Score: 1 )
by Disfrazada on Monday, November 23, 2009 (12:49:11)

Disfrazada

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Re: iN vEiN (Score: 1 )
by angeroseblue on Monday, November 23, 2009 (14:02:59)

can't wait

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Re: iN vEiN (Score: 1 )
by Mysteri on Friday, November 20, 2009 (22:58:06)

LOVE it, Dis! (or should I say hATe it)?

mYsteRI

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Re: iN vEiN (Score: 1 )
by Disfrazada on Monday, November 23, 2009 (22:59:23)

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Re: iN vEiN (Score: 1 )
by StarDust on Saturday, November 21, 2009 (03:33:46)

Oh this is lovely.... Your trying not to be bad, but you can't, I understand... Smile

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Re: iN vEiN (Score: 1 )
by Disfrazada on Monday, November 23, 2009 (23:00:52)

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Re: iN vEiN (Score: 1 )
by thewholesoul on Saturday, November 21, 2009 (08:56:46)

man you nailed that one to the crucifix disfrazada!! [just a heads up: line 12 did you mean to say "prayers"?]

take good care,
best wishes
conor

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Re: iN vEiN (Score: 1 )
by Disfrazada on Monday, November 23, 2009 (23:04:58)

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Re: iN vEiN (Score: 1 )
by nerdgirl on Saturday, November 21, 2009 (09:44:24)

we'll soon become your greatest muse.... Marie is my muse.... strange how these evil little voices work. This is awesome Dr. D.

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Re: iN vEiN (Score: 1 )
by Disfrazada on Monday, November 23, 2009 (23:11:02)

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Re: iN vEiN (Score: 1 )
by Ridge on Saturday, November 21, 2009 (11:33:51)

You NEVER disappoint...awesome!

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Re: iN vEiN (Score: 1 )
by Disfrazada on Monday, November 23, 2009 (23:12:20)

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Re: iN vEiN (Score: 1 )
by Dreaming-Demon on Saturday, November 21, 2009 (14:06:06)

....fUCKING AWESOME....well done my friend...truely a masterpiece

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Re: iN vEiN (Score: 1 )
by Disfrazada on Monday, November 23, 2009 (23:13:34)

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Re: iN vEiN (Score: 1 )
by ColeKane on Saturday, November 21, 2009 (17:15:38)

wHy doN’t yOu just aCCepT ouR bIrTh…
tHis iS YoUr liTTle heLL oN eArtH .

This line is incredible. I feel it.
It seems to be the perfect description of the twisted life we are stuck in when we are born to this earth.

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Re: iN vEiN (Score: 1 )
by Disfrazada on Monday, November 23, 2009 (23:15:59)

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Re: iN vEiN (Score: 1 )
by Liquid_Chaos on Monday, November 23, 2009 (12:54:23)

Outstanding poem my friend, great work! L_C

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Re: iN vEiN (Score: 1 )
by Disfrazada on Monday, November 23, 2009 (23:17:24)

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Re: iN vEiN (Score: 1 )
by micsir on Friday, January 22, 2010 (00:36:27)

Loved the message you convey of peace eand acceptance. Only once do we accept our mortality, are we free from our from our inadequacies. It reminded me of C.G Jung saying, " God is a myth, but that myth is the revelation of a divine life in man."

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