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Exquisite Corpse
| Rude Awakening | Contributor |
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got to the shore line still dReam gReen tails fLapping |
induce |
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labyrinths of rooms ... following .... never ending ... waking blurrs ... incompleted ... |
Mandyman |
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buRb trueS oF inteR SpACE ... whisk .... .. |
induce |
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through the vortex ... sucked into the motions ... reaching out to hold ... ugh! BEEP BEEP BEEP ... |
Mandyman |
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she kept belching up sod throughout the day |
graphitegirl |
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as the ground around her melted like hot wax ... she thought she'd better up and fly away |
Mandyman |
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landing on the roof of a prison and their first day |
induce |
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the roof under them started melting like hot wax ... they thought they'd better up and fly away |
Mandyman |
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as the dungeon stairs lead, I will follow |
graphitegirl |
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I look down - these stairs are unsound ... walked into a web that stood from ceiling to ground ... |
Mandyman |
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Mr Botch was behind me tail unsound. |
induce |
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in the haze of morning, the moon was just a reminder |
graphitegirl |
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fluffy things hinges upon eye lid nuseries |
induce |
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turns off alarm n goes back to sleep ... I haven't finished what I were doing in my dreams ... |
Mandyman |
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trying to stay awake she poked yet another hole in her eyelid with the toothpick |
graphitegirl |
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""""":::::::::; ;; ; ; paint still in the air around 1980s train station. .. . .----->>>>>>Hoooooooot! |
induce |
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by Mandyman on Sunday, July 20, 2008 (18:40:41) |
Thanks for introducing this to me Q ... am now scared and excited 
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by questionajourney on Monday, July 21, 2008 (04:35:15) |
good to see ya:) the others hopefully will be around shortly.
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by graphitegirl on Tuesday, July 22, 2008 (05:13:49) |
I love it! I was so scared the first time I did my first corpse. I had no idea what to expect. It must be something to do with the name!
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by induce on Tuesday, July 22, 2008 (06:27:44) |
Thanks Q, g pm'd me, Hi Mandyman!
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by Mandyman on Tuesday, July 22, 2008 (07:05:12) |
Hiya Graphitegirl ... Induce! ... is it normal through this to only see the last line before your own? 
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by graphitegirl on Friday, July 25, 2008 (06:08:31) |
Awesome corpse! quick and very fun!
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by Mandyman on Saturday, July 26, 2008 (03:36:27) |
That was fun ... but what happened to Q? lol ... oh and I didn't mean for two lines about flying to come through, I thought the first one had failed to load etc... never mind
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