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Exquisite Corpse

Perpetual Deflection	Contributor
Evil surrounds me, forcing words of hate to spew fowards	Blair_witch
all about the room like purple-black lit atomical-fonts. Cupid jitters into being washed in ultra-metallic glory	induce
a portrait is awakened guided by its newly found glisten, swathes and frenetic posing	darkblues
The computerized weekday fears the timetable	fogglethorpe
like a borderline schizophrenic fears agents, listening	Blair_witch
to Beyonce on the radio, there are messages of	induce
tragic laments and free-style projectile vomits stuck in the ether	darkblues
The error strays.	fogglethorpe
Life, like numerical lines in computer code: 011100	Blair_witch
tended to the digital daisy designers so supa-hyper-coloured, electrons reflected dreams	induce
stealthily enriched miniscule colliding binary techs, flinch, flinch	darkblues
A superior narrative flashes above the combining center.	fogglethorpe
reading it, a form of ecstacy that only I understand	Blair_witch
peaking across malt-table-verses, copper-green leaves pages flung two and throw	induce
a rip, a trip across endless black verges, precipices of past smashing future	darkblues
trance-atlantic spans and vans sing the chance of grand stands	fogglethorpe

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Re: [No Subject] (Score: 1 )
by induce on Sunday, January 18, 2009 (15:11:25)

yo cheers Blair_Witch for calling, lets have FUN!

Just one thing 'one person per round really slows the 'E.C' down. Cool

Re: [No Subject] (Score: 1 )
by induce on Sunday, February 22, 2009 (03:50:02)

Blair_Witch, this is fun, I'm so glade an E.C. has finally begun after so long...'Exsellllennnt' *Mr Burns*

Re: [No Subject] (Score: 1 )
by Blair_witch on Wednesday, February 25, 2009 (02:45:32)

Fogglethorpe, you really left me nothing to work with...darn you...lol

Re: [No Subject] (Score: 1 )
by fogglethorpe on Wednesday, March 04, 2009 (02:39:18)

Weird fun. We must do this again. Blair...a surveyor is waiting for you in the orchard! Join us.

Re: [No Subject] (Score: 1 )
by induce on Friday, March 06, 2009 (16:19:43)

Just read this one, that was fun! Thanks to all, let's do this again.

Re: [No Subject] (Score: 1 )
by darkblues on Thursday, March 12, 2009 (23:46:27)

i like how it turned out, surprisingly cohesive...i think