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That Hot Summer GardenContributor
The sounds around were not that important, but the color of unusual flowers. One could think, "What an unusual garden" zhaul
lady with crutches in a garden of roses cussing out her siberian husky in the summer's heat angeroseblue
she wipes her brow and notes the colours of butterflys forgetting her pain, her dog pants induce
the dog chases the butterfly through the field ,the lady follows with her crutch angeroseblue
her legs have been on the mend for a while now and she is feeling good induce
she lays her blanket on the ground as the breeze blows her hair, the dog watching the leaves sway back and forth in the wind angeroseblue
it's so nice to watch the clouds taking the shapes of hope to come induce
clouds showing lovers in a swirling dance,she enters into a daze wishing she had the same angeroseblue
The fragrant Junpers filled the terrace and she tried to dance in her wheelchair. butterflyzrfree
Her dog pricked it's ears up it could hear something that only dogs can hear. induce
The silent approach of a man's cane. when audible, he raised her head and butterflyzrfree
saw her dad's weathered and smiling face full of love, he had with him induce
The dog barked, the junipers gave more fragrance, as she burst into a smile. butterflyzrfree
in his hands a picnic basket ,throwing scraps to the dog who was still chasing the wind angeroseblue
she laughed as the dog beagan to chase it's tail as her father pulled up a seat and gave her a flower induce
the dog dizzily falls to the ground as she places the yellow flower in her hair, her father still smiling angeroseblue
as he notes her lover scaling the side fence induce
" Get water" she instructs father, as the hot sun beats down and there is no shade now. butterflyzrfree
Her father complies after moving her to a shady spot. She really wanted vodka though. induce
the taste for vodka increases so she tells the dog to go get her purse from the hanging vine angeroseblue
just a few quick swigs while her father isn't watching, her boy friend has finally made it over the fence, when the dog induce
grabs the drink and runs behind a tree,father turning just in time to see her boyfriend steal a kiss angeroseblue
he smiles his ancient well smiled smile and sets the dog onto him induce
And the dog licks him mercilessley, both ign9ring the pain of the woman. butterflyzrfree
the dog licks the boyfriends face,as he is hurried away and holds his girlfriends hand,dad's face looking stern now angeroseblue
The girlfriend hates the daughter, who is having trouble breathing from the heat, and allergic to the marigolds, so butterflyzrfree
she moves away into a more mellow scene just under the comfort of her favourite cyprus tree while induce
he carves their initials in the trunk of the tree,the dog lagging behind as father goes inside angeroseblue
With his daughter in the wheelchair inside, she rests under the air conditioning, resentful. butterflyzrfree
wishing her true feelings could be known to him,that she wants out and wants to take the dog with her angeroseblue
As the air conditioning broke, and the beads of sweat began began to pour over them they butterflyzrfree
began undressing to their underclothes,making them even hotter angeroseblue
And sthe sun beat down on them, sweat pouring, no towels but all they thought about was the lust. butterflyzrfree
The dog's bark almost interrupted, the handicap is not an obstacle, the garden bare silently the passion arousing. zhaul
Delicate is the day as birds chime thoughts of water reflection dipping in and out of thier bath. induce
she takes her camera and takes photos of the event angeroseblue
her smile is a promise, she will not forget, this moment zhaul
as she recalled her birthday induce
And then, all of those birthdays past where she was not in a wheelchair, so, butterflyzrfree
she began to cry as her boyfriend kissed her ever so softly angeroseblue
Letting his hands wander here, there, everywhere, so that butterflyzrfree
beautiful garden became the stage for her free dance, a handicap no longer felt. zhaul
And she felt the universe and the stars collide inside her head in a beautiful revalation when butterflyzrfree
he opened his heart to her and revealed what she had know all alone that he angeroseblue
Was the one crippled, having had major heart surgury, and that scar, on his chest, which gave it away, then, with a tear, she said butterflyzrfree
"I have no idea what is going on.", with that the induce
lovely fragrance of the gardens coupled with the kindness and anger surrounding her. butterflyzrfree
The approaching afternoon tested the birds as they began to look for perches to roost. induce
In the heat, they lost interest, but then clouds gathered, rain! And a lot of it! The songbirds searched for shelter. butterflyzrfree
the dance of love began, raindrops rendezvoused with leaves, the mating of life zhaul
as the entrance to here cocoon became cozy with two angeroseblue
last strands of light flickering as fireflies began to whisper in her dog's ear induce
Who knows what they would say? But the annoying sound and confusing lights angered the dog, who butterflyzrfree
barked and ran under the front room couch in his anger angeroseblue
I was an awkward moment, broken silence, hands recalling caresses zhaul
caresses that opened the senses to much more,the ability to let go once more as in past times angeroseblue
Memories that exalt the skin, memories that caress a new day and a goodbye zhaul
Will envelop them all with love, peace, calm and inner strength. butterflyzrfree
there is no other way to live but through all that is given angeroseblue
the lady mused. Looking down at her dog she wondered what wisdom he held in his doggie mind. induce


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induceRe: [No Subject] (Score: 1 )
by induce on Thursday, July 23, 2009 (15:53:43)
Very Happy hey butterflyz, cool to see you set one, i'll be checking,
cheers
innduce.Rrr Cool



butterflyzrfreeRe: [No Subject] (Score: 1 )
by butterflyzrfree on Friday, July 24, 2009 (14:38:56)
It is difficult to do wilthout being able to see the previous lines of the poem. I set a button wrong on the template, will not do this next time...



zhaulRe: [No Subject] (Score: 1 )
by zhaul on Saturday, July 25, 2009 (04:22:57)
the mystery makes it more interesting Shocked



induceRe: [No Subject] (Score: 1 )
by induce on Wednesday, July 29, 2009 (00:31:43)
Laughing Laughing Laughing Gail we all tried, not seeing the lines I think parts of it are great. Laughing Laughing Laughing sorry, I just cracked up. Thanks for setting the EC. Very Happy



butterflyzrfreeRe: [No Subject] (Score: 1 )
by butterflyzrfree on Wednesday, July 29, 2009 (14:14:28)
This did turn out good for a blind poem! Well, this next one I posted is not blind, so that there will be much more connetion. I had the least entries, I think! I did not know that it would go so fast! The first round was over before i even knew that there was a poem! Great job, guys! Smile






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