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Exquisite Corpse

Title:let your mind lead you	Contributor
He awakened in the day, in a sawgrass field, with some ants, and the sun setting, in, was that, the, west???	butterflyzrfree
they were crawling on his arms singing a beautiful song	angeroseblue
...one of many questions he had no answer to.	sapphicmuse
should he sleep as the flowers or find shelter from the night	angeroseblue
Shelter, oh, his head hurt, when arising! His money and wallet were,	butterflyzrfree
fused to his brain, chronically and intentionally.	sapphicmuse
But metaphorically. He had no wallet, no money, not even a comb. just blood where his hair should be.	butterflyzrfree
every thought he had dripped among the sidewalks, leaving trails of wonder	angeroseblue
or is it any wonder? Perhaps we had it in for him all along.	sapphicmuse

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Re: hey you guys thanks (Score: 1 )
by angeroseblue on Tuesday, August 04, 2009 (04:14:23)

thanks for being a part of my first exquisite corpse
i know it was kind of short
just had to experiment first Laughing

Re: [No Subject] (Score: 1 )
by butterflyzrfree on Wednesday, August 05, 2009 (00:13:35)

Short, but pretty good! I mean, it actually makes sense! And a great topic!