Septolet

The Septolet is a poem consisting of seven lines containing fourteen words with a break in between
the two parts. Both parts deal with the same thought and create a picture.



Fish
swimming unaware
making big waves

shark
stalking waters
in eye's view
his meal

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Rain
falling harshly
pelting the grounds

flowers
swaying movements
dancing to beats
of water
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This is two poems correct? If so, they are both excellent, and I have nothing to critisize. Nice job.

both are nice, but the second one is awesome.

there is something in the last two lines of the first one that gives me a "puzzle" sign

They are both water poems. You could post them as such I propose
"his meal
in eyes view'
What do you think?

thanks to you both
and b-man
i thin Gail solved the puzzle