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PostPosted: Mon Aug 31 17:44:17 EDT 2009    Post subject: Voices Reply with quote

I heard the tinkling voices then,
Whispering with glee.
Excited little chattering
That seeked some sport with me.
They said that I had lost my mind,
My heart was stolen, gone.
That babbling, teasing little sound
Got louder and went on.
And all the other noises
That will make a forest's song,
Were drowned out by the cackling
Of the scornful fairy throng.
They called that I was lost, a fool,
Those mocking elfin sprites,
And capered oft from branch to branch,
Hopping with delight.
I smiled, indulged their fancies
And endured along the path,
And every stone did taunt my love,
And every bush did laugh.
But as I reached the stile again,
The voices semed to go;
The teasing was the peaceful brook,
The sneers, cow's gentle low,
Accusing eyes, the sun's warm face,
The jeering, magpie's bill.
I turned and touched my cap to them
And went, on fuller still.
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 10 7:08:59 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: Voices Reply with quote

Some great images here, Keveen.

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 10 7:22:00 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: Voices Reply with quote

Thanks,that means a lot.Everyone on here've sent very encouraging comments to this nervy newbie
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 12 12:07:28 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: Voices Reply with quote

i like how u make everything so imaginable i agree with mamta i like how its a litttle semi story within its good
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 16 8:30:47 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: Voices Reply with quote

Keveen, I love the flow of this poem. I also think the imagery is great.
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 29 11:48:21 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: Voices Reply with quote

A very well written and whimsical piece.

Would you consider breaking it into quatrains? That would make it even more readable, in my opinion.

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 19 1:32:38 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: Voices Reply with quote

enchanting---------------------

near wycombe, bucks-----

derbyshire has an art school there

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 21 6:39:31 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: Voices Reply with quote

Nice portrayal of various sounds here. And I actually had to check the dictionary for "stile" heh Very Happy

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 28 7:17:22 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: Voices Reply with quote

Really good images created here.

Thanks for the read becky

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 4 21:57:40 EST 2009    Post subject: Re: Voices Reply with quote

This flowed really well. I agree that breaking it up may make it an easier read, but I quite enjoyed this poem. The rhyme and rhythm worked well.

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 4 22:28:05 EST 2009    Post subject: Re: Voices Reply with quote

Really well put together. I enjoyed it a great deal.

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