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angeroseblue
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 Posted: Fri Nov 6 22:38:05 EST 2009 Post subject: sHOW nOO fEEAR |
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look that ssssssss can't breath
dead in the eyes....
remember he senses fear smells it...tastes it
shaKing, pale-faced I...can't breath
my hand is now defiled ... cut it off
i don't want it
it can have it
Screaming Fearpleassssse...get him off of me
that tongue just brushed ...my..skin
why do people compare penises
to these things
not one has made me feel this way
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butterflyzrfree
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| Posted: Sat Nov 7 10:27:41 EST 2009 Post subject: Re: sHOW nOO fEEAR |
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I like the fact that you use that teeny tiny font and it is a major clue to this write!. G.
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| Posted: Sat Nov 7 10:54:39 EST 2009 Post subject: Re: sHOW nOO fEEAR |
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i heard it's not the tool, but the hand holding it...LOL
broken fingers and everything else...
couple of nits:
1. breathe
2. i don't want it, it (should it be "you"?) can have it
other than that, cool!
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lash570
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| Posted: Sat Nov 7 13:30:17 EST 2009 Post subject: Re: sHOW nOO fEEAR |
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this ade my snake rattle-----------erective,,,err,,,,I mean effective!!
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angeroseblue
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| Posted: Sat Nov 7 23:03:07 EST 2009 Post subject: Re: sHOW nOO fEEAR |
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| Bogeyman wrote: |
i heard it's not the tool, but the hand holding it...LOL
broken fingers and everything else...
couple of nits:
1. breathe
2. i don't want it, it (should it be "you"?) can have it
other than that, cool! |
thanks for looking at this
and
believe me
it is NOT the hands 
could be the broken fingers though
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Beauty_In_Pain
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| Posted: Sun Nov 8 0:47:48 EST 2009 Post subject: Re: sHOW nOO fEEAR |
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Oh wow. I was utterly entranced! Great job!
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