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wylde
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PostPosted: Thu May 12 7:16:19 EDT 2011    Post subject: a womb with a view Reply with quote

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a womb with a view
calves below lowing their
moos
to your muesli thighs

curtains askance as
you begin to dance

cheek in jowl
as the moon
begins to howl

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PostPosted: Thu May 12 9:33:39 EDT 2011    Post subject: Re: a womb with a view Reply with quote

Sinister and playful at the same time..a combo that, for some inexplicable reason, works perfectly.
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Starved and screamed and ate mad dogs


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PostPosted: Fri May 13 2:16:50 EDT 2011    Post subject: Re: a womb with a view Reply with quote

hugh - thanks as ever for your input. i am delighted that it seems i have succeeded in making the improbable probable and the nonsensical somehow making sense from a confused ball of stands of words & images.

perhaps i am overstating it a little, but i remain delighted that it works for you, a person who is no easy task master.


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PostPosted: Fri May 13 6:29:34 EDT 2011    Post subject: Re: a womb with a view Reply with quote

curtains askance as
you begin to dance

i love this. I think i might love it even more as

curtains askance as
you begin your dance

don't ask me why. it seems heavier with some terrible intent somehow.

This is great and peculiar stuff. I could not in a trillion years
imitate you.

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Starved and screamed and ate mad dogs


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PostPosted: Fri May 13 6:58:10 EDT 2011    Post subject: Re: a womb with a view Reply with quote

electrictiger wrote:
curtains askance as
you begin to dance

i love this. I think i might love it even more as

curtains askance as
you begin your dance

don't ask me why. it seems heavier with some terrible intent somehow.

This is great and peculiar stuff. I could not in a trillion years
imitate you.

et - agreed! it makes it more intimate. rockon and thanks. writ now as:

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a womb with a view
calves below lowing their
moos
to your muesli thighs

curtains askance as
you begin your dance

cheek in jowl
as the moon
begins to howl

.

catch up with you on monday. hava rocking weekend.


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PostPosted: Fri May 13 19:29:05 EDT 2011    Post subject: Re: a womb with a view Reply with quote

Smile fun read Wylde, been sum time since i read your work

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PostPosted: Mon May 16 2:38:04 EDT 2011    Post subject: Re: a womb with a view Reply with quote

anna9 wrote:
Smile fun read Wylde, been sum time since i read your work

thank you anna. now dont abstain too long before reading me again, no need to inflict unnecessary suffering upon yourself - im open here 24/7!

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