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 Posted: Thu May 12 7:16:19 EDT 2011 Post subject: a womb with a view |
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a womb with a view
calves below lowing their
moos
to your muesli thighs
curtains askance as
you begin to dance
cheek in jowl
as the moon
begins to howl
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| Posted: Thu May 12 9:33:39 EDT 2011 Post subject: Re: a womb with a view |
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Sinister and playful at the same time..a combo that, for some inexplicable reason, works perfectly.
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wylde
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| Posted: Fri May 13 2:16:50 EDT 2011 Post subject: Re: a womb with a view |
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hugh - thanks as ever for your input. i am delighted that it seems i have succeeded in making the improbable probable and the nonsensical somehow making sense from a confused ball of stands of words & images.
perhaps i am overstating it a little, but i remain delighted that it works for you, a person who is no easy task master.
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| Posted: Fri May 13 6:29:34 EDT 2011 Post subject: Re: a womb with a view |
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curtains askance as
you begin to dance
i love this. I think i might love it even more as
curtains askance as
you begin your dance
don't ask me why. it seems heavier with some terrible intent somehow.
This is great and peculiar stuff. I could not in a trillion years
imitate you.
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wylde
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| Posted: Fri May 13 6:58:10 EDT 2011 Post subject: Re: a womb with a view |
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curtains askance as
you begin to dance
i love this. I think i might love it even more as
curtains askance as
you begin your dance
don't ask me why. it seems heavier with some terrible intent somehow.
This is great and peculiar stuff. I could not in a trillion years
imitate you. |
et - agreed! it makes it more intimate. rockon and thanks. writ now as:
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a womb with a view
calves below lowing their
moos
to your muesli thighs
curtains askance as
you begin your dance
cheek in jowl
as the moon
begins to howl
.
catch up with you on monday. hava rocking weekend.
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fun read Wylde, been sum time since i read your work