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electrictiger And for a moment, it was like joy was


        
Joined: Sep 18, 2009 Posts: 1932 Credits: 310 Location: Birmingham, Alabama

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Posted: Thu Feb 23 15:48:41 EST 2012 Post subject: a neutral shade of bliss |
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[this is inspired by / related to a friend's poem]
I listen to you
while driving at night
inky black hole mouth
spilling out
nouns & verbs
and that same
tired question
hanging like a frozen white balloon
above our heads,
larger than the moon.
I lie, heavy with my knowing -
that the road will bend ahead
past the fir trees
for the same reason
I've come to hate you.
Be quiet. Let me
covet curves and telephone poles,
houses I can't afford,
the memory of other hands
on my knee
different nouns
inside me.
I lie, light with my knowing -
there's another car
wrapped around a tree
five minutes into the future
I covet the rush
that'll overcome us
the sound
of unanswered questions
larks leaving my body
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wylde And for a moment, it was like joy was


     
Joined: Aug 25, 2010 Posts: 1869 Credits: 16 Location: between my ears. all.ways
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Posted: Fri Feb 24 7:21:08 EST 2012 Post subject: Re: a neutral shade of bliss |
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.wow.
im coming back after the weekend to truly wallow in & enjoy this.
all i can say as life tugs my sleeve to be in different places of be.ing.
for now. its like a ripened cabernet chortling over my mind.
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_________________ interviewing wylde
and did you exchange a walk on part in the war
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zoe_in_a_bubble Knows what a simile is


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Posted: Fri Feb 24 13:04:08 EST 2012 Post subject: Re: a neutral shade of bliss |
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You're on a roll Mr Tiger.
Hurry up and post to finished section 
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electrictiger And for a moment, it was like joy was


        
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Posted: Fri Feb 24 16:44:15 EST 2012 Post subject: Re: a neutral shade of bliss |
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Thanks, you two.
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