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Why I write
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butterflyzrfree Told love the world was on fire


   
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Posted: Tue Feb 21 9:57:39 EST 2012 Post subject: Why I write |
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Comments and corrections, suggestions, welcome.
I paint words with heart.
So others know I am here, was here,
a part of me to stay on when I die. I carry visions.
To celebrate that I am alive,
to celebrate love.
I have heard and seen things that are so bad
that I must write them.
to get them off me.
Like mosquitos, they stick.
The pain softens, yet I am passing it to another.
This is wrong, or is it simply truth.
I write because I can, and
because I love, and to sing life true.
I write because it is beautiful,
and my soul wants to create
beauty.
To share this on the page and keep it forever,
spill happiness from my heart
as a gift to all who read...
I will die, am afraid to die, so must write.
Enlighten the world with God knows what
for who am I to take on that great burden.
All knowledge must be shared, much less wisdom.
Hopefully, in this golden age
this is some here for me to share.
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fogglethorpe Who knew we would get this far?


                 
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Posted: Mon Feb 27 15:32:58 EST 2012 Post subject: Re: Why I write |
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Hi Gail..I wanted to post a full edit here, but I want your permission first.
I think this could be a great poem with a few minor edits for clarity.
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butterflyzrfree Told love the world was on fire


   
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Posted: Tue Feb 28 18:32:01 EST 2012 Post subject: Re: Why I write |
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Hugh: as this is already posted, I am not adverse to tweaking it a bit, but could you message me? Thanks.
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Posted: Wed Feb 29 10:27:26 EST 2012 Post subject: Re: Why I write |
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Sure. I'll send it today.
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