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 Posted: Sat Feb 25 22:25:09 EST 2012 Post subject: Your thoughts |
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I don't think for a second
you have more of a warped mind,
you just express your thoughts
before I've explored mine.
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| Posted: Mon Feb 27 15:11:04 EST 2012 Post subject: Re: Your thoughts |
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A clever introspective piece. It begs some hard philosophical questions..
Who is capable of what, and in what context? What is sanity?
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| Posted: Thu Mar 1 16:33:01 EST 2012 Post subject: Re: Your thoughts |
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This is good - I'm reading it as expressive of a pet peeve of mine...
those who quickly retort before considering
what the other person just said...
Am I right, or did I just read myself into this?
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| Posted: Tue Mar 6 10:52:08 EST 2012 Post subject: Re: Your thoughts |
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You are close. It is about people who talk before you have had a chance to collect your own thoughts I suppose.
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| Posted: Wed Mar 7 0:45:30 EST 2012 Post subject: Re: Your thoughts |
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To me this reads well as the first stanza of a longer poem. If it were mine, I would look at expanding on the theme in a few more verses.
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| Posted: Fri May 11 18:25:06 EDT 2012 Post subject: Re: Your thoughts |
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thank you it's simple but complicated
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