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PostPosted: Sat Feb 25 22:25:09 EST 2012    Post subject: Your thoughts Reply with quote

I don't think for a second
you have more of a warped mind,
you just express your thoughts
before I've explored mine.

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PostPosted: Mon Feb 27 15:11:04 EST 2012    Post subject: Re: Your thoughts Reply with quote

A clever introspective piece. It begs some hard philosophical questions..

Who is capable of what, and in what context? What is sanity?
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 28 8:14:39 EST 2012    Post subject: Re: Your thoughts Reply with quote

Smile Thank you Foggle

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 1 16:33:01 EST 2012    Post subject: Re: Your thoughts Reply with quote

This is good - I'm reading it as expressive of a pet peeve of mine...

those who quickly retort before considering
what the other person just said...

Am I right, or did I just read myself into this?

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 6 10:52:08 EST 2012    Post subject: Re: Your thoughts Reply with quote

You are close. It is about people who talk before you have had a chance to collect your own thoughts I suppose.

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PostPosted: Wed Mar 7 0:45:30 EST 2012    Post subject: Re: Your thoughts Reply with quote

To me this reads well as the first stanza of a longer poem. If it were mine, I would look at expanding on the theme in a few more verses.

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PostPosted: Fri May 11 18:25:06 EDT 2012    Post subject: Re: Your thoughts Reply with quote

thank you it's simple but complicated
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