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misscomplex
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 Posted: Tue Oct 21 20:31:37 EDT 2008 Post subject: Dear Jacob |
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Dear Jacob,
Come here
Let me kiss your wounds
I am sorry for all the things
Of wordly malice
Your hurt runs deep
Its beyond your flesh
You cant even bandage a wound
That cant be seen.......
Look in my eyes
I got something to show you
Because you know I am no stranger
To loving so madly
I was mad about love
My wounds need kissing too....
I dont think you are ready yet.
Maybe?
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LoSt
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| Posted: Tue Oct 21 20:37:20 EDT 2008 Post subject: Re: Dear Jacob |
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I thought youd never ask.
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misscomplex
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| Posted: Tue Oct 21 20:43:13 EDT 2008 Post subject: Re: Dear Jacob |
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I dont think you have ever met anyone like me. Other than your mirror. I just hope you let go of the poison that has chained you down.....that is if you want to be cured. Evil has brought us in eachother's path.......lemonade from lemons could it be?
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LoSt
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| Posted: Tue Apr 24 18:55:00 EDT 2012 Post subject: Re: Dear Jacob |
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you stole my heart with that one you know...
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| Posted: Wed Jul 25 18:51:56 EDT 2012 Post subject: Re: Dear Jacob |
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wonderful poem
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| Posted: Wed Dec 26 23:15:34 EST 2012 Post subject: Re: Dear Jacob |
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A little sad, this poem, yet it is filled with cliches. I think that reworking through some of the cliches - ie - your hurt runs deep - could be enhanced to make a creatively heartfelt piece of work.
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