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wylde
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 Posted: Thu Jul 12 6:28:38 EDT 2012 Post subject: touching allways |
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my body & mind comes
home into you the you
which gives me back to me
so that I can give back
to you
the me that makes making you
come home into us
arriving never leaving
the destination which is
our rest together draped
by life
being home with our bodies; mind
and spirit touching the untouchables
we touch through
each other
touching our selves
as we give to the giving
the destination
never ever
leaving our journey
together in presence
touching allways
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| Posted: Thu Jul 12 10:49:41 EDT 2012 Post subject: Re: touching allways |
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This is a different kind of write for you..a little metaphysical. I like it. And the photo is great.
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wylde
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| Posted: Fri Jul 13 3:25:47 EDT 2012 Post subject: Re: touching allways |
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fogs - thank you, muchly appreciated.
i do tend to be somewhat type-cast and stereotyped, because of my penchant towards avant garde / surreal jackson pollock kind of poetry, but i actually do quite a bit of more 'conventional work' as well, like:
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thanks. again.
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| Posted: Wed Jul 25 18:50:05 EDT 2012 Post subject: Re: touching allways |
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very good poem
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wylde
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| Posted: Thu Jul 26 4:20:42 EDT 2012 Post subject: Re: touching allways |
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thank you abdo11
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| Posted: Thu Aug 2 7:37:37 EDT 2012 Post subject: Re: touching allways |
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You moved from your usual style of writing. The picture complements the poem beautifully.
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wylde
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| Posted: Thu Aug 2 7:46:51 EDT 2012 Post subject: Re: touching allways |
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mamta - thank you. the picture & words were a birthday gift for shalane.
i do have an infinite love-affair with words. in many ways.
i appreciate your read.
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| Posted: Thu Aug 30 3:45:47 EDT 2012 Post subject: Re: touching allways |
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nice poem
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| Posted: Thu Aug 30 8:13:30 EDT 2012 Post subject: Re: touching allways |
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romeo - thank you.
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| Posted: Wed Oct 3 18:35:31 EDT 2012 Post subject: Re: touching allways |
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"arriving never leaving" I love this implication.
We could look at the still 'present' moments that together make our journey up as a series of arrivals, or a series of leavings, but i prefer your take on it.
It's a question that's worth long thought.
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| Posted: Thu Oct 4 4:25:29 EDT 2012 Post subject: Re: touching allways |
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tks for the thoughts.
as usual im mixing meanings & metaphors with "presence" as in with "being with" - time - as well as "gifted with presents" - gifts.
like i would say - heaven scent - meaning heaven sent ....i really dont know where my neurons go. sigh.
pehaps a little cheesy.
luvs.
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| Posted: Sat Oct 6 21:48:23 EDT 2012 Post subject: Re: touching allways |
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Your poem answers questions which the heart cannot. I approve. The picture also pairs against the words well.
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| Posted: Mon Oct 8 6:24:29 EDT 2012 Post subject: Re: touching allways |
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sistermoon - thanks for seeing & feeling it. its the most i can always hope for.
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