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PostPosted: Thu Jan 12 2:37:13 EST 2006    Post subject: Western Reply with quote

my poetry
tugs the brim of his hat down,
spits into the dirt,
starts down toward where i'm standing.

as always he's alone, anonymous,
unshaven, dust-riddled,
equal parts death and tenderness,
never sure himself about which comes next.

that outlaw taught me
everything i know, but i pin the star
onto my vest and step out into the street.

i feel my arm tighten.


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PostPosted: Thu Jan 12 2:40:53 EST 2006    Post subject: Re: Western Reply with quote

Reminds me of Gary Snyder's 'How Poetry Comes To Me'

good work

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 12 2:42:45 EST 2006    Post subject: Re: Western Reply with quote

"it's like an old western!" exclaimed the young humanicidal boy.

... Tony you rock!

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 12 2:43:28 EST 2006    Post subject: Re: Western Reply with quote

unknownothers wrote:
Reminds me of Gary Snyder's 'How Poetry Comes To Me'

good work

high praise to be compared to Sensei Snyder. thanks.
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 12 2:44:22 EST 2006    Post subject: Re: Western Reply with quote

Humanicide wrote:
"it's like an old western!" exclaimed the young humanicidal boy.

... Tony you rock!

Fank you.
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 12 2:44:32 EST 2006    Post subject: Re: Western Reply with quote

Tony wrote:
unknownothers wrote:
Reminds me of Gary Snyder's 'How Poetry Comes To Me'

good work

high praise to be compared to Sensei Snyder. thanks.

It's true! Before I even finished that popped into my head.

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 12 2:46:54 EST 2006    Post subject: Re: Western Reply with quote

fanking is good?

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 12 2:48:00 EST 2006    Post subject: Re: Western Reply with quote

Humanicide wrote:
fanking is good?
if you do it right Wink

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 12 2:48:28 EST 2006    Post subject: Re: Western Reply with quote

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fanking is good?

yeah -- just a silly way of saying
"thank you"


(say it out loud)
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 12 2:50:19 EST 2006    Post subject: Re: Western Reply with quote

wasn't sure if you were fanking me across the face for saying it was like an old western or if you were fanking me for my praise of you... heh...::::feels dumbish::: ...i need more whiskey.......

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 12 9:48:18 EST 2006    Post subject: Re: Western Reply with quote

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my poetry
tugs the brim of his hat down,
spits into the dirt,
starts down toward where i'm standing.

as always he's alone, anonymous,
unshaven, dust-riddled,
equal parts death and tenderness,

I think that is an accurate discription of your poetry. "Tony's words personified." Nice.

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 12 14:03:11 EST 2006    Post subject: Re: Western Reply with quote

Very cool. Likey Likey.

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 12 21:50:25 EST 2006    Post subject: Re: Western Reply with quote

You should just write a book. I would read it.

Even if it didn't make sense.

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 13 0:42:55 EST 2006    Post subject: Re: Western Reply with quote

i like the way his words taste to my drum

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 13 0:50:57 EST 2006    Post subject: Re: Western Reply with quote

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i like the way his words taste to my drum
this guy right here...

is cool...

and was one of the forerunners in pushing me to put out a book.
if not the head cheerleader!

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 13 2:20:20 EST 2006    Post subject: Re: Western Reply with quote

NEdaynow wrote:
You should just write a book. I would read it.

Even if it didn't make sense.

there are ten books of mine out already, including a selected poems.
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 13 2:23:58 EST 2006    Post subject: Re: Western Reply with quote

That was fantastic. Tony, you always amaze me in the way you think of things to write about. I love your work, everytime.

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 13 2:26:01 EST 2006    Post subject: Re: Western Reply with quote

...by chance do you have a link to a site or something of the sort where they can be purchased and/or do you have exerpts from books you could post to give a taste for us interested in possibly aquiring copies???? Very Happy

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 13 8:22:12 EST 2006    Post subject: Re: Western Reply with quote

Humanicide wrote:
...by chance do you have a link to a site or something of the sort where they can be purchased and/or do you have exerpts from books you could post to give a taste for us interested in possibly aquiring copies???? Very Happy


If you want a taste, some of my older stuff is up on www.getunderground.com, including an MP3. Go hunting on the site; i was featured poet in August 2002.

Plus there's stuff here, of course. All over the place...

Any of my books that are in print, including the recent collection of selected poems, "poet.", from Doublebunny Press, are available from for the huge total of 5 bucks. Hit me backchannel with an address, we'll chat about it. (That goes for anyone, by the way.)
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 14 23:41:32 EST 2006    Post subject: Re: Western Reply with quote

awesome, i have to start saving up some greens!! Very Happy

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 15 3:37:24 EST 2006    Post subject: Re: Western Reply with quote

<3

Personification is glee.

I really liked that.
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