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Tony "I'm not mad. I'm just PISSED OFF!"


  
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Posted: Thu Jan 12 2:37:13 EST 2006 Post subject: Western |
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my poetry
tugs the brim of his hat down,
spits into the dirt,
starts down toward where i'm standing.
as always he's alone, anonymous,
unshaven, dust-riddled,
equal parts death and tenderness,
never sure himself about which comes next.
that outlaw taught me
everything i know, but i pin the star
onto my vest and step out into the street.
i feel my arm tighten.
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unknownothers Starved and screamed and ate mad dogs


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Posted: Thu Jan 12 2:40:53 EST 2006 Post subject: Re: Western |
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Reminds me of Gary Snyder's 'How Poetry Comes To Me'
good work
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Tony "I'm not mad. I'm just PISSED OFF!"


  
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Posted: Thu Jan 12 2:43:28 EST 2006 Post subject: Re: Western |
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| unknownothers wrote: |
Reminds me of Gary Snyder's 'How Poetry Comes To Me'
good work |
high praise to be compared to Sensei Snyder. thanks.
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Tony "I'm not mad. I'm just PISSED OFF!"


  
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Posted: Thu Jan 12 2:44:22 EST 2006 Post subject: Re: Western |
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"it's like an old western!" exclaimed the young humanicidal boy.
... Tony you rock! |
Fank you.
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unknownothers Starved and screamed and ate mad dogs


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Posted: Thu Jan 12 2:44:32 EST 2006 Post subject: Re: Western |
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| Tony wrote: |
| unknownothers wrote: |
Reminds me of Gary Snyder's 'How Poetry Comes To Me'
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high praise to be compared to Sensei Snyder. thanks. |
It's true! Before I even finished that popped into my head.
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Tony "I'm not mad. I'm just PISSED OFF!"


  
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Posted: Thu Jan 12 2:48:28 EST 2006 Post subject: Re: Western |
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| fanking is good? |
yeah -- just a silly way of saying
"thank you"
(say it out loud)
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iwrite Finds Beauty in Everything


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Posted: Thu Jan 12 9:48:18 EST 2006 Post subject: Re: Western |
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my poetry
tugs the brim of his hat down,
spits into the dirt,
starts down toward where i'm standing.
as always he's alone, anonymous,
unshaven, dust-riddled,
equal parts death and tenderness, |
I think that is an accurate discription of your poetry. "Tony's words personified." Nice.
_________________ Poetry is a mirror which makes beautiful that which is distorted. ~Percy Shelley |
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natey The Chief Troublemaker


 
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Posted: Thu Jan 12 14:03:11 EST 2006 Post subject: Re: Western |
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Very cool. Likey Likey.
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NEdaynow Has the Poetry Bug


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Posted: Thu Jan 12 21:50:25 EST 2006 Post subject: Re: Western |
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You should just write a book. I would read it.
Even if it didn't make sense.
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unknownothers Starved and screamed and ate mad dogs


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Posted: Fri Jan 13 0:50:57 EST 2006 Post subject: Re: Western |
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| i like the way his words taste to my drum |
this guy right here...
is cool...
and was one of the forerunners in pushing me to put out a book.
if not the head cheerleader!
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Tony "I'm not mad. I'm just PISSED OFF!"


  
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Posted: Fri Jan 13 2:20:20 EST 2006 Post subject: Re: Western |
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You should just write a book. I would read it.
Even if it didn't make sense. |
there are ten books of mine out already, including a selected poems.
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Posted: Fri Jan 13 2:23:58 EST 2006 Post subject: Re: Western |
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That was fantastic. Tony, you always amaze me in the way you think of things to write about. I love your work, everytime.
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Tony "I'm not mad. I'm just PISSED OFF!"


  
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Posted: Fri Jan 13 8:22:12 EST 2006 Post subject: Re: Western |
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...by chance do you have a link to a site or something of the sort where they can be purchased and/or do you have exerpts from books you could post to give a taste for us interested in possibly aquiring copies????  |
If you want a taste, some of my older stuff is up on www.getunderground.com, including an MP3. Go hunting on the site; i was featured poet in August 2002.
Plus there's stuff here, of course. All over the place...
Any of my books that are in print, including the recent collection of selected poems, "poet.", from Doublebunny Press, are available from for the huge total of 5 bucks. Hit me backchannel with an address, we'll chat about it. (That goes for anyone, by the way.)
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Posted: Sun Jan 15 3:37:24 EST 2006 Post subject: Re: Western |
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<3
Personification is glee.
I really liked that.
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