I'll see you then

hotstuff

Tyler left us after only two days.
There was nothing we could do.
God has his ways.

Seth was gone only one hour later.
There can’t be a reason
He is simply a taker.

Now Jake, he had absolutely no chance.
God must be laughing
This isn’t mischance

You were suppose to be there
It was suppose to be ok
I’ll put my faith elsewhere
I’ll see you on doomsday

Lark

Triplets?

hotstuff

If you are refering to my sons, then no. If you are questioning my choice of rhyming then yes, for 3 sons ..sheesh...i hope that covers all the bases Smile

Humanicide

?? i liked it, but i do not know who T S & J are ???

hotstuff

My sons. 2000, 2002, and 2005 I lost them because I have an incompetent cervix...meaning I couldn't carry them long...meaning there was nothing wrong with them, but everything wrong with me. Did I mention God has one sick sense of humour?

Humanicide

ooooooh... i'm sorry to know that. i don't know what to say, as i haven't been in that position before, other than the cliche
"i'm sorry to hear that"
but this is a good piece, re-read it, review, recite, - and elaborate on it. since this is obviously a very personal piece, see if you can add more to it, or answer it with a couple more!!!!

hope to read more from you soon

-me

natey

I liked this one. Simple, and kinda in your face about it without being overly dramatic. In general I respect people's decisions to participate in religious beliefs, but the whole god thing is usually rather uncomfortable for me to read. otherwise, good stuff.