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neo soul summison part 2 (erotica)
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ELEMENTSOF_UIZM Has the Poetry Bug


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Posted: Thu Jan 19 11:51:27 EST 2006 Post subject: neo soul summison part 2 (erotica) |
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But wait,
As I wipe the cash, rules, everything, around, me (c.r.e.a.m) of my face I INSPECTED her DECK because this OLD DIRTY BASTARD was ready to fuck again…… thrust again this YOUNG BUCK was so seductive she had me G UNIT the fuck up off her sex appeal and it had me like whoa…………
Ready to BLACK ROBBBIN it P DIDDY making da band sexing while MTV is filming it,
She had me TUPAC’ED the fuck up sing hail Mary’s……..wondering who got the juice while her pussy muscle contracting……..contraction caused a reaction as my ELEPHANT MAN hung ,
But we began to SIZZLA the sheets body moving to a slow winding reggae beat she caught an orgasm the didn’t end until the following week………………….
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redheadedslxt The first hundred years are the hardest


  
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Posted: Thu Jan 19 16:46:29 EST 2006 Post subject: Re: neo soul summison part 2 (erotica) |
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you used one of my favorite songs! method mans 'sweet love'. this was interesting. i liked what your doing but it also kinda feels like cheating. but it was clever.
INSPECTED her DECK made me laugh!
interesting though, very interesting.
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