(My first real attempt at writing a song)


Hello my friend
and thank you for stopping in

Let’s watch the sun
curtain call what could have been

As now gives way
to drift in more never then’s

Oooh baby
your sweet alibi worth living in

So take my hand and fly with me
to float with the laze of a feather

Dance on the edge of reality
and know that this dream lasts forever

I’ll sing to you
if you really want me to

And hold you close
when your rainbow fades to blue

But here tonight
a single light is born from two

Oooh baby
your sweet alibi worth living through

So take my hand and fly with me
to float with the laze of a feather

Dance on the edge of infinity
and know that this dream lasts forever

So take my hand and fly with me

So take my hand and fly with me

So many places we have to see

So take my hand and fly with me

*solo*

Hello my friend

It’s good to see your face again

that sings like a song

the repetition of "so" so many times , is that necessary ? what do you think ?
i mean try read it aloud, or sing it aloud and then decide ...

Well... at least it vibes like a song.

Normally I avoid repetition, but I feel like songs give a certain creative license that I normally don't allow myself. Consider the song in full swing by the time I get to the repetition part, obviously I can not portray that without actual audio.

Thanks for reading it anna.