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PostPosted: Mon Apr 4 14:36:01 EDT 2011    Post subject: Chinese friend--before re-write and after Reply with quote

March looked on the stage singing, and that the other side of the universe - the dark side seems to be the eagle, raised a storm of high-power battle, the dark side, suddenly turned into a million pieces shine golden light, heavy sweet, cool, beautiful , Shiny, flying with no border quiet, the myth of leisure Kingdom

But this myth of the Kingdom, full of sweet singing songs, wearing a skirt bottom of the jar on his head the birds are dancing, flowers are the waist, tied with a small garden drums, standing opposite the birds, with Gavel, when the fast slow drum against a small garden, when the drum battle for the right of the storm sigh, this dance of birds suddenly become a different style, style, birds suddenly Into a light, such as swallows dance with the beautiful lotus style, style, this myth is the Kingdom of harmony, not Dao Guang, gun shadow, I thought this song in March,

If the eagle, the right to raise a storm of battle, then, that the other side of the universe, the book certainly is a tragedy, the book of life filled with blood, tears, cry, moan, lament,

Now that the other side of the universe, but it is a sense of humor, wit, spirit of the game, the beautiful colors of hi magic fairy drama in favor of life ----- the birth, development and growth of comedy, then, who raised it The right to battle the storm it,

In that curious, thought playing the Nocturne ----- with philosophy, poetry do bamboo, silk strings, playing the Chopin that can be supported with the best match of the Nocturne Nocturne, the birds, the flowers of song, dance Team, holding his hands, was coming across to the curious, contemplative surrender, this curious, meditation philosophy, poetry, music ----- bamboo, silk strings flying out of philosophy, poetry, music, eyes, bright with the other side of the Plum inner universe of magic, such as playing cards in the dark heart of the garden, bright with, sweet, cool springs of poetry,

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 10 9:36:32 EDT 2011    Post subject: Re: Chinese friend--before re-write and after Reply with quote

March looked on the stage singing,
and that the other side of the universe -
the dark side
seems to be the eagle,
raised a storm of high-power battle,
the dark side, suddenly turned into a million pieces shine
golden light, heavy sweet, cool, beautiful ,
Shiny, flying with no border quiet,
the myth of leisure

But this myth, full of sweet singing songs,
wearing a skirt bottom
the jar on his head
the birds are dancing, flowers are the waist,
tied with small garden drums,
standing opposite the birds, with gravel.
When the fast slow drum against a small garden,
when the drum battle for the right of the storm
this dance of birds suddenly a different style,
style, birds suddenly Into a light,
such as swallows dance with the beautiful lotus, style,
this myth is the Kingdom of harmony, not Dao Guang, gun shadow,
I thought of this song in March.

If the eaglehas the right to raise a storm of battle,
then, the other side of the universe,
the book certainly is a tragedy,
the book of life filled with blood,
tears cry, moans lament.

the other side of the universe,
is a sense of humor, wit, spirit of the game,
the beautiful colors of high drama-- flavor of life -----
then, who raised it?
The right to battle the storm.

In that curious, thought plays the Nocturne -----
with philosophy, poetry--
bamboo, silk strings, playing the Chopin
that can be supported with the best match of the Nocturne
contemplative surrender, this curious, meditation
philosophy, poetry, music, bamboo, silk strings
flying out of philosophy, poetry, music, eyes,
bright with the other side of the Plum
inner universe of magic, playing cards in the dark heart
of the garden, bright with, sweet, cool springs of poetry...
***********************************

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You must understand the whole of life, not just one little part of it. That is why you must read, that is why you must look at the skies, that is why you must sing, and dance, and write poems and suffer and understand, for all that is life.

Jiddu Kr
Karma: 5642.50

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Starved and screamed and ate mad dogs


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PostPosted: Sun Apr 10 9:49:57 EDT 2011    Post subject: Chinese poetry--before interpretati and after--Buddhist/Taoi Reply with quote

March looked on the stage singing,
that the other side of the universe -
the dark side
seems to be an eagle.

Eagles raise a storm--
the power of battle.
the dark side, suddenly turns into a million pieces
such golden light, heavy sweet, cool shining,
flew with no border.
Quiet is the myth of leisure.

But this myth, full of sweet songs singing,
birds dancing, flowers at the waist,
standing opposite the birds--with pebbles.
When the fast drum slows, against a small garden,
when the drums battle for the right of the storm
this dance of the birds suddenly turns.
as swallows dance with the lotus.
this myth of harmony, not
the usual gunshadow.
I thought of this song in March.

If the eagle has the right to raise a battle,
then the book will be a tragedy.
The book of life filled with blood.
tears cry, moans lament.

The other side of the universe,
is a sense of humor, wit, spirit of the game,
beautiful colors of high drama-- flavor of life -

There is always the right to battle in the storm.

And in that curious thought plays the Nocturne -----
with philosophy, poetry--
bamboo, silk strings, playing Chopin
that can be supported with the best fuegue of the Nocturne
contemplative surrender, this curious, meditation
philosophy, poetry, music, bamboo, silk strings
flying out of poetry's eyes,
bright with the other side of the Plum.

inner universe of magic, playing cards with dark heart
of the garden,
bright again with some sweet, cool. springs
of poetry...
***********************************

_________________
You must understand the whole of life, not just one little part of it. That is why you must read, that is why you must look at the skies, that is why you must sing, and dance, and write poems and suffer and understand, for all that is life.

Jiddu Kr
Karma: 5642.50

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