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PostPosted: Fri Apr 29 6:03:21 EDT 2011    Post subject: music.in a bottle. Reply with quote

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music.in a bottle.
smoked ether eyes turn
in peripheral wended strands
wandering glitter threads
of corpulate banquets
spread of endowry fruit.

head address pomegranite
splinter mind of muse

dust drops shiver mercurial
conduits arced in
anticipations


nested wombs of chiffon pink
hold the downs
of neckled magic goose


the spears handle drums
pneumatically pale soles stamped
in dances beat into a motherless earth

holding the singular trance mission
as unscarred sacred bones
self sustain delivery


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PostPosted: Tue May 3 11:30:43 EDT 2011    Post subject: Re: music.in a bottle. Reply with quote

I think I sprained my tongue reading this! But it was fun and I'll recover.

Did you invent the word "neckled"? Or did you mean "necklet"?
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PostPosted: Wed May 4 3:14:01 EDT 2011    Post subject: Re: music.in a bottle. Reply with quote

fogglethorpe wrote:
I think I sprained my tongue reading this! But it was fun and I'll recover.

Did you invent the word "neckled"? Or did you mean "necklet"?


hugh - tongue tornadoes are my speciality

"neckled" is a self-conjured word. for one thing i have a 'thing' for swans necks and the like, i find them exquisite and then it was also a play on 'nestled' 'down' as in a quilt of feathers.

thanks. always appreciate your comments.


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PostPosted: Sun May 22 23:17:28 EDT 2011    Post subject: Re: music.in a bottle. Reply with quote

'smoked ether eyes turn'--why not burn?

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PostPosted: Mon May 23 3:08:05 EDT 2011    Post subject: Re: music.in a bottle. Reply with quote

butterflyzrfree wrote:
'smoked ether eyes turn'--why not burn?

gail... i like! let me ruminate a little, but is does make sense...thankx

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PostPosted: Fri May 27 23:37:39 EDT 2011    Post subject: Re: music.in a bottle. Reply with quote

The eyes spin if they burn, a fresco.

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PostPosted: Sat May 28 14:15:12 EDT 2011    Post subject: Re: music.in a bottle. Reply with quote

My goose is quite neckled at this time.

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PostPosted: Mon May 30 2:26:11 EDT 2011    Post subject: Re: music.in a bottle. Reply with quote

induce wrote:
The eyes spin if they burn, a fresco.


hmmm..love your imagery andye...


rite on

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PostPosted: Mon May 30 2:29:56 EDT 2011    Post subject: Re: music.in a bottle. Reply with quote

butterflyzrfree wrote:
My goose is quite neckled at this time.



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