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abdo11
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 28 23:24:25 EST 2012    Post subject: Life is a black grave full of blood Reply with quote

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The life is black

The streets are blood

The sky is red

The rain is blood

Love is death

The hearts are black

The books are blood

The lines are sad

The future is very bad

The poetry is very black

Reading is yellow blood


The eyes are very red

The way is a hell

You will fail in a deep well.


The room is black

The seats are hell

Beds are fire

In Egypt or work shire

In USA or France

The fingers [/color]are blood

The clothes are blood

The telephone is blood

The doors are blood

The carpets are blood

By blood the cars are washed

By blood the letters are sent

By blood the countries are ruled

As I have body without head

I have heart without a head

The world I have read

The hearts I have read

The ladies I have read

The kings I have read

The presidents I have read

The leaders I have read

Shakespeare said

Antara said

Japan said

Revolutions said

Brazil says

Norway says

Prince
of poets Said

Israel and the oil said

The past, the present and the future said

If you want to succeed

You must eat your brothers’ meat

You must drink their blood

You must be a lion

You must be a killer

You must be a fox

You must be a seller

To your blood

To your ideas

To your principles

Or it will be stolen

Before your eyes

As life is a black grave

Full of bones and full of blood

عبداللطيف أحمد فؤاد
غزالة السنبلاوين دقهليه مصر
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Told love the world was on fire


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PostPosted: Thu Mar 8 19:20:44 EST 2012    Post subject: Re: Life is a black grave full of blood Reply with quote

I found the middle section to be especially effective:


The fingers [/color]are blood

The clothes are blood

The telephone is blood

The doors are blood

The carpets are blood

By blood the cars are washed

By blood the letters are sent

By blood the countries are ruled

As I have body without head

I have heart without a head

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Wrote Lyric Verse at least once.


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PostPosted: Sun Mar 18 4:48:37 EDT 2012    Post subject: Re: Life is a black grave full of blood Reply with quote

Thank u very much my dear freinde elect..
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