GotPoetry.com > > Forums > > Poetry Workshops > > Post a Poem > > Homunculus
GotPoetry.com

Help
Toggle Content .:: Home :: Poems :: Workshop Forums :: Register :: Features ::.
Toggle Content Judge this Poem

Toggle Content User Info

Welcome Anonymous

Nickname
Password
(Register)

Membership:
Latest: NoahBob
New Today: 0
New Yesterday: 0
Overall: 16964

People Online:
Members: 0
Visitors: 71
Bots: 1
Staff: 0
Staff Online:

No staff currently online.

Toggle Content Paid Membership
Buy a paid membership and get more out of GotPoetry!

Advertise on the GotPoetry Advertising Network.

Toggle Content Donations
Donate with PayPal!
GotPoetry is a community supported site.
Due Date: Oct 31
October Goal: 230.00
Gross Amount: 20.00
PayPal Fees: 0.88
Net Balance: 19.12
Below Goal: 210.88
Site Currency: USD
 8%
October Donations
7th  Blondie

Toggle Content Top Poetry Clubs

Forums > > Poetry Workshops > > Post a Poem > > Homunculus
My PostsMy Posts  SearchSearch   visitView posts since last: visitdayweekmonth

Homunculus


Post new topic   Reply to topic     |##| -> |=|      Forum Index > > Post a Poem
View previous topic :: View next topic  
Author Message
Treagal
And for a moment, it was like joy was


And for a moment, it was like joy was
Staff Picks!Staff Picks/January 2011Staff Picks/January 2011Eat Chicken!


Joined: Feb 04, 2008
Posts: 1940
Credits: 182


PostPosted: Fri Apr 6 2:33:33 EDT 2012    Post subject: Homunculus Reply with quote

Homunculus

1.

man on Suturglu Street: limbs contort&
usurp mobility. camera phones warp-spasm,
his eyes weep animosity

(:<-a post 2
minutes later
to Youtube.->: )

2.

day& day Tristian from the balcony: sits
in a wicker-back wheelchair& gesticulates
his fear of falling.

↑↑↑↑↑↑↑↑↑↑↑
←he goes→
←nowhere→
↓↓↓↓↓↓↓↓↓↓↓

Notes: kind of broken-finger-y, a (relatively non-objective) portraiture of some peoples faces& actions in times of disarray.

_________________
I like the way youre put together.
Karma: 1351.90

Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
zhaul
Been here longer than 3 servers ago.


Been here longer than 3 servers ago.
Poet of the Month!Staff Picks/August 2010Best Critic/August 2010Eat Chicken!gotpoetry curator


Joined: Nov 30, 2007
Posts: 5531
Credits: 365
Location: somewhere out there

PostPosted: Fri Apr 6 9:44:46 EDT 2012    Post subject: Re: Homunculus Reply with quote

Very interesting to show this as /like a dictionary definition. quite original and the last stanza, the arrows make a very graphic point. I think it is all broken fingers, but very good, I liked it. The hard part for me is to relate the definitions of homunculus to the poem.

_________________
Karma: 3605.00

Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website MSN Messenger Photo Gallery
Treagal
And for a moment, it was like joy was


And for a moment, it was like joy was
Staff Picks!Staff Picks/January 2011Staff Picks/January 2011Eat Chicken!


Joined: Feb 04, 2008
Posts: 1940
Credits: 182


PostPosted: Fri Apr 6 17:51:01 EDT 2012    Post subject: Re: Homunculus Reply with quote

cool thanks zhaul, this poem is really just my evil, dastardly outlines that I plan on making into a different piece. what I really want to showcase is the driving force behind a face, eventually.

_________________
I like the way youre put together.
Karma: 1351.90

Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
butterflyzrfree
Starved and screamed and ate mad dogs


Starved and screamed and ate mad dogs
Staff Picks!Staff Picks/December 2009Staff Picks/March 2011Staff Picks/February 2012Blog Picks/July 2013Staff Picks/October 2013Staff Picks/October 2013Staff Picks February 2014


Joined: Jan 17, 2009
Posts: 2691
Credits: 349
Location: Miami,FL

PostPosted: Sat Apr 21 4:48:34 EDT 2012    Post subject: Re: Homunculus Reply with quote

In that case, go ahead and drive !

_________________
You thought you had time---the Buddha
Karma: 5804.50

Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Photo Gallery
Display posts from previous:   
Post new topic   Reply to topic     |##| -> |=|      Forum Index > > Post a Poem All times are GMT - 5 Hours
Page 1 of 1


Jump to:  
You cannot post new topics in this forum
You cannot reply to topics in this forum
You cannot edit your posts in this forum
You cannot delete your posts in this forum
You cannot vote in polls in this forum
 Forum FAQForum FAQ




GotPoetry - News for poets. Place to write.

GotPoetry is the most popular network of performance poets and poetry readings on the internet today.

Editors: John, Mamta and a cast of tens of others.
Publisher: John Powers

Content © 1998-2008
GotPoetry LLC. All rights reserved

Engine released under GNU GPL, Code Credits, Privacy Policy, Legal Notices

Search:
 
GotPoetry.com Web

Forums Search
Gallery Search
Advanced Search


Link to Full Archives
Link to all News Topics


Link for all submission options for this site.

Subscribe - Use an RSS reader to stay up to date with the latest news and posts from GotPoetry.

GotPoetry News RSS Feed

Subscribe with Yahoo!
Subscribe with Google

Other GotPoetry RSS Syndication -  You can syndicate other parts of our site using the following files:

Yesterday's Top News
Yesterday's Top Poems
Forums
New Photos
Blogs
Downloads
Featured Articles