| Order | Title | Comment | Date | Rating | | Reads | Comments |
 01 | |  thank you so much for your kind words, Twelve! cheers, B. | 2009-11-20 20:08:51 | 1 |   | 79 | 12 |
| 02 | | you put it on here! LOVE IT>>>> 8) | 2009-11-20 20:07:37 | 1 | | 96 | 6 |
| 03 | | thanks so much and i've also enjoyed some of your together work that u did very creative, i hope to be good as you someday :) | 2009-11-20 20:07:30 | 1 | | 23 | 2 |
| 04 | | thank you for the read | 2009-11-20 20:04:04 | 1 | | 77 | 8 |
| 05 | | thank you | 2009-11-20 20:03:38 | 1 | | | |
| 06 | | unfortunely it is about me. I have MS and the fatigue is awful so i have to take meds to help the fatigue never ending battle. thank you for the read | 2009-11-20 20:03:14 | 1 | | | |
| 07 | | Another powerful write Defiance. Very heartfelt my friend.
Regards,
Disfrazada | 2009-11-20 19:54:36 | 1 | | 72 | 7 |
| 08 | | This is a fantastic write q'a'. The elusive truth that sometimes is hidden in our subconcious out of reach, until our ink forms words on the page. And then paints a picture that perhaps only we understand, but at least then we do. Poetry and writing in general is an amazing medium for creativity and self healing.
What a talent you have, thank you for sharing.
Dave | 2009-11-20 19:48:59 | 1 | | 17 | 6 |
| 09 | | LOL nice ahum LOL
thanks for stopping by | 2009-11-20 19:41:46 | 1 | | 68 | 9 |
| 10 | | hahaha thats funnier... you should write about that.... | 2009-11-20 19:38:59 | 1 | | 24 | 5 |
| 11 | | Thanks q'a', ramonez wrote a poem that reminded me of a movie 'Wolf Creek', that is loosley based on real life events. This is a bi-product of reading his poem, and remembering the movie.
regards
Dave | 2009-11-20 19:37:23 | 1 | | 10 | 2 |
| 12 | | very real..and open....good job..great ending | 2009-11-20 19:34:33 | 1 | | 14 | 1 |
| 13 | | I can relate to this, so well said | 2009-11-20 19:28:21 | 1 | | 30 | 4 |
| 14 | | Lol wow thats funny....i had a cat once..i woke up and she was layin on my face...i freaked the fuck out cuz i wasnt sure what was goin on lol | 2009-11-20 19:25:53 | 1 | | 24 | 5 |
| 15 | | no prob and thanks for the comment on my poem as well | 2009-11-20 19:24:05 | 1 | | 32 | 3 |
| 16 | | Hahaha, thank you. =) Yeah, the cause for the poem was outstanding as well. =D Yep, take care. | 2009-11-20 19:20:07 | 1 | | 133 | 5 |
| 17 | | Thank you for reading and commenting. Appreciated! | 2009-11-20 19:19:36 | 1 | | 148 | 11 |
| 18 | | Honestly, I wrote this in less then 10 minutes.
Thank you so much for the kind words. It means alot to me.Really.
thanks | 2009-11-20 19:18:33 | 1 | | 30 | 4 |
| 19 | | Thanks, Jenna! Do you think that I should strike the first stanza? Do you find it confusing to the rest of the poem? | 2009-11-20 19:14:57 | 1 | | 16 | 2 |
| 20 | | I'm glad I painted the scene so well that you wished to be there! Thanks for reading! J. | 2009-11-20 19:14:43 | 1 | | 148 | 11 |
| 21 | | this is raw and hardcore...a unique glimpse into the maddened, or so we think THEY are..qaj | 2009-11-20 19:14:39 | 1 | | 10 | 2 |
| 22 | | zubzir, thank you for the kind words, and the time taken to read my poem. all is appreciated | 2009-11-20 19:13:06 | 1 | | 41 | 4 |
| 23 | | i agree with this poetic plea..well done..qaj | 2009-11-20 19:13:02 | 1 | | 109 | 3 |
| 24 | | Sorry for typos, that would be 'carefully written" and the other one | 2009-11-20 19:12:02 | 1 | | 29 | 3 |
| 25 | | Wow, you have a great voice...very well done my friend, I enjoyed this ALOT | 2009-11-20 19:09:17 | 1 | | 28 | 6 |
| 26 | | this is a good write so intense in the writing you can sort of feel the characters pain. glad you did publish i enjoyed reading it | 2009-11-20 19:01:09 | 1 | | 27 | 3 |
| 27 | | Dudes sometimes are so cruel they really will do anything to get in your pants then act as if you are nothing after. sorry this happened to you but you can only learn from it. nice poem | 2009-11-20 18:46:29 | 1 | | 16 | 1 |
| 28 | | an interesting way to put it
and I agree :)
peace
Greg | 2009-11-20 18:30:40 | 1 | | 328 | 4 |
| 29 | | this is disturbingly funny to me
peace
Greg | 2009-11-20 18:28:32 | 1 | | 45 | 5 |
| 30 | | Although I am not in complete agreement with the content I think that you really put together a good argument!!
A bit rabid in the deportment
I see and feel your intent
Don't let them think that they are heaven sent
Don't let them think we don't know their bent
Rage against the darkness and all their prurience
We won't get fooled again as long as you're here Spence!!
:' )
eph | 2009-11-20 18:05:44 | 1 | | 189 | 7 |
| 31 | | Ahh well
This is the expression of a long past experience.
Trying to expand my horizons and stop just moaning.
Glad that you were able to ????? relate :' )
Be well
eph | 2009-11-20 17:54:13 | 1 | | 16 | 3 |
| 32 | | Hey you can smile at whatever makes you smile... personally I prefer to smile at girls :' )
eph | 2009-11-20 17:52:16 | 1 | | | |
| 33 | | Conor, you have really done your research! Great information. Thank you very much I appreciate! Gail | 2009-11-20 17:51:37 | 1 | | 362 | 17 |
| 34 | | Thanks for the comment. Tough place to be at the moment. Our troops (CDN) did not enter that engagement but I feel for you and all of the peeps over there.
Will look over your stuff when I get a moment. Thanks for pointing me in the direction.
eph | 2009-11-20 17:50:44 | 1 | | 22 | 3 |
| 35 | | Definitely enjoyed this! 10 for you! | 2009-11-20 17:48:40 | 1 | | 103 | 13 |
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