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Comments - All of the comments on poems in the finished poetry section.

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 New Todayvery nice angeroseblue I enjoyed it a lot
2009-11-07 14:36:321Printer friendly page  email this1315
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 New TodayChilling write my friend. Well done. Be well.
2009-11-07 14:34:281Printer friendly page  email this426
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 New TodayI liked this one a lot. I think that every letter starting each line should have been capitalized, though, or else the whole poem should be in conventional sentences.
2009-11-07 14:33:331Printer friendly page  email this2203
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 New Todayvery nice tink :) well done peace Greg
2009-11-07 14:32:471Printer friendly page  email this204
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 New TodayI like the back and forth way this poem is constructed, like a tennis match.
2009-11-07 14:31:201Printer friendly page  email this1412
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 New TodayIs this a quotation?
2009-11-07 14:29:471Printer friendly page  email this451
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 New TodayA pure and simple big fat WOW WOW WOW Take care mark Shazza x
2009-11-07 14:27:591Printer friendly page  email this74042
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 New Todayhmmmmm, forgot about that thank you for reminding me, and for the read
2009-11-07 14:14:361Printer friendly page  email this382
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 New Todaythankyou poetess, kind of you to say so
2009-11-07 14:12:341Printer friendly page  email this122
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 New TodayMaybe
2009-11-07 14:01:081Printer friendly page  email this638
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 New Todaythis is sweet..*smiles*
2009-11-07 13:57:591Printer friendly page  email this122
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 New Todayi know plenty of thieves, scammers, and dole junkies but they are all from the 21st century if afraid ha ha.
2009-11-07 13:24:421Printer friendly page  email this11814
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 New TodayTo make it even, I would add a short adjective before 'touch.' I don't use the workshop so I'm not really sure how that would turn out, but it couldn't really hurt you all that much. I honestly think this is perfectly fine the way it is. No poem is perfect, and that's what makes them great.
2009-11-07 13:14:021Printer friendly page  email this342
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 New TodayThanks, nerdgirl.
2009-11-07 13:05:371Printer friendly page  email this424
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 New TodayUnfortunately, it's true.
2009-11-07 13:04:111Printer friendly page  email this212
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 New TodayTop notch my american mate, but I reckon you should use 'cannot' instead of 'can't'. Apart from that- and probably my accent- perfect, spence
2009-11-07 12:55:481Printer friendly page  email this13821
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 New TodayToo cool...Thank you so much...Have an awesome day... :D
2009-11-07 12:51:231Printer friendly page  email this173
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 New Todaythnx for the postive feedback i hope i will too
2009-11-07 12:48:261Printer friendly page  email this384
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 New Todaythnx i kno i shud have capitalized the i's i should't of rushed but thanx
2009-11-07 12:47:081Printer friendly page  email this182
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 New TodayThank you for the time...Have a great weekend!!!!
2009-11-07 12:44:271Printer friendly page  email this102
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 New Todaynice write.
2009-11-07 12:39:121Printer friendly page  email this324
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 New Todayvery nice and sweet.
2009-11-07 12:35:541Printer friendly page  email this204
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 New TodayLoved it! A very cool poem my friend. Take care.
2009-11-07 12:08:541Printer friendly page  email this102
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 New TodayWow Crush this a great small poem. You really set my imagination in motion with such few words. Well done my friend, best wishes. :twisted:
2009-11-07 12:05:401Printer friendly page  email this173
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 New TodayThank you disfrazada for the read... :D :D :D
2009-11-07 12:05:261Printer friendly page  email this194
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 New TodayVery well done my friend. :twisted: . Be well. P.s I am going to send you a pm I have a question about the poem.
2009-11-07 11:52:361
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 New TodayThank you so much MTPOET! After having to raise kids (all ages) these days, we have to go to heaven, we just have to! :D
2009-11-07 11:39:441Printer friendly page  email this1864
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 New TodayLol...Thank you for the time demon...be well... 8)
2009-11-07 11:34:451Printer friendly page  email this194
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 New TodayVery nice... enjoyed it
2009-11-07 11:31:041Printer friendly page  email this172
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 New TodayInteresting... Keep them coming
2009-11-07 11:29:591Printer friendly page  email this1972
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 New Todaynice one
2009-11-07 11:29:241Printer friendly page  email this903
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 New TodayThere is no word of 'betrayal' until the last stanza.
2009-11-07 11:28:151Printer friendly page  email this832
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 New TodayThank you demon... 8) ...Dream on!!!
2009-11-07 11:27:401Printer friendly page  email this173
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 New TodayMilton is one of my all time faves.
2009-11-07 11:25:391Printer friendly page  email this952
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 New TodayThis could have been a perfect ku if the last line had read "body's the habit".
2009-11-07 11:24:271Printer friendly page  email this1231






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