| Order | Title | Comment | Date | Rating | | Reads | Comments |
01 | |  very nice angeroseblue
I enjoyed it a lot | 2009-11-07 14:36:32 | 1 |  | 131 | 5 |
02 | |  Chilling write my friend. Well done. Be well. | 2009-11-07 14:34:28 | 1 |  | 42 | 6 |
03 | |  I liked this one a lot. I think that every letter starting each line should have been capitalized, though, or else the whole poem should be in conventional sentences. | 2009-11-07 14:33:33 | 1 |  | 220 | 3 |
04 | |  very nice tink :)
well done
peace
Greg | 2009-11-07 14:32:47 | 1 |  | 20 | 4 |
05 | |  I like the back and forth way this poem is constructed, like a tennis match. | 2009-11-07 14:31:20 | 1 |  | 141 | 2 |
06 | |  Is this a quotation? | 2009-11-07 14:29:47 | 1 |  | 45 | 1 |
07 | |  A pure and simple big fat WOW WOW WOW
Take care mark
Shazza x | 2009-11-07 14:27:59 | 1 |  | 740 | 42 |
08 | |  hmmmmm, forgot about that
thank you for reminding me, and for the read | 2009-11-07 14:14:36 | 1 |  | 38 | 2 |
09 | |  thankyou poetess, kind of you to say so | 2009-11-07 14:12:34 | 1 |  | 12 | 2 |
10 | |  Maybe | 2009-11-07 14:01:08 | 1 |  | 63 | 8 |
11 | |  this is sweet..*smiles* | 2009-11-07 13:57:59 | 1 |  | 12 | 2 |
12 | |  i know plenty of thieves, scammers, and dole junkies but they are all from the 21st century if afraid ha ha. | 2009-11-07 13:24:42 | 1 |  | 118 | 14 |
13 | |  To make it even, I would add a short adjective before 'touch.'
I don't use the workshop so I'm not really sure how that would turn out, but it couldn't really hurt you all that much. I honestly think this is perfectly fine the way it is. No poem is perfect, and that's what makes them great. | 2009-11-07 13:14:02 | 1 |  | 34 | 2 |
14 | |  Thanks, nerdgirl. | 2009-11-07 13:05:37 | 1 |  | 42 | 4 |
15 | |  Unfortunately, it's true. | 2009-11-07 13:04:11 | 1 |  | 21 | 2 |
16 | |  Top notch my american mate, but I reckon you should use 'cannot' instead of 'can't'. Apart from that- and probably my accent- perfect, spence | 2009-11-07 12:55:48 | 1 |  | 138 | 21 |
17 | |  Too cool...Thank you so much...Have an awesome day... :D | 2009-11-07 12:51:23 | 1 |  | 17 | 3 |
18 | |  thnx for the postive feedback
i hope i will too | 2009-11-07 12:48:26 | 1 |  | 38 | 4 |
19 | |  thnx i kno i shud have
capitalized the i's
i should't of rushed but thanx | 2009-11-07 12:47:08 | 1 |  | 18 | 2 |
20 | |  Thank you for the time...Have a great weekend!!!! | 2009-11-07 12:44:27 | 1 |  | 10 | 2 |
21 | |  nice write. | 2009-11-07 12:39:12 | 1 |  | 32 | 4 |
22 | |  very nice and sweet. | 2009-11-07 12:35:54 | 1 |  | 20 | 4 |
23 | |  Loved it! A very cool poem my friend. Take care. | 2009-11-07 12:08:54 | 1 |  | 10 | 2 |
24 | |  Wow Crush this a great small poem. You really set my imagination in motion with such few words. Well done my friend, best wishes. :twisted: | 2009-11-07 12:05:40 | 1 |  | 17 | 3 |
25 | |  Thank you disfrazada for the read... :D :D :D | 2009-11-07 12:05:26 | 1 |  | 19 | 4 |
26 | |  Very well done my friend. :twisted: . Be well.
P.s I am going to send you a pm I have a question about the poem. | 2009-11-07 11:52:36 | 1 | | | |
27 | |  Thank you so much MTPOET! After having to raise kids (all ages) these days, we have to go to heaven, we just have to! :D | 2009-11-07 11:39:44 | 1 |  | 186 | 4 |
28 | |  Lol...Thank you for the time demon...be well... 8) | 2009-11-07 11:34:45 | 1 |  | 19 | 4 |
29 | |  Very nice... enjoyed it | 2009-11-07 11:31:04 | 1 |  | 17 | 2 |
30 | |  Interesting... Keep them coming | 2009-11-07 11:29:59 | 1 |  | 197 | 2 |
31 | |  nice one | 2009-11-07 11:29:24 | 1 |  | 90 | 3 |
32 | |  There is no word of 'betrayal' until the last stanza. | 2009-11-07 11:28:15 | 1 |  | 83 | 2 |
33 | |  Thank you demon... 8) ...Dream on!!! | 2009-11-07 11:27:40 | 1 |  | 17 | 3 |
34 | |  Milton is one of my all time faves. | 2009-11-07 11:25:39 | 1 |  | 95 | 2 |
35 | |  This could have been a perfect ku if the last line had read "body's the habit". | 2009-11-07 11:24:27 | 1 |  | 123 | 1 |