| Order | Title | Comment | Date | Rating | | Reads | Comments |
01 | |  G'day Jack...
Enjoyed your message...As we get older the seasons and years tend to take us along so quickly and before we know it...we bid another season, as you wrote, adieu.
Well done.
Lindsay | 2008-10-07 02:40:01 | 8 |  | 23 | 4 |
02 | |  G'day spence...
A great poem on the circle of life spence and how we tackle our tribulations throughout the seasons.
Lindsay | 2008-10-07 02:35:46 | 9 |  | 48 | 6 |
03 | |  G'day paul...
Crikey paul...I'm struggling to point out the southern cross. My observation is in your first verse... if it's cloudy I don't see any stars.
Naturally through my ignorance, I have had to read your poem a number of times and I must say I enjoyed the way you have enlightened me.
Thanks Paul
Lindsay | 2008-10-07 02:28:49 | 9 |  | 31 | 3 |
04 | |  Sweet.,
Regards
Mohit | 2008-10-07 02:25:55 | 9 |  | 118 | 5 |
05 | |  G'day Mary Ann...
A beaut autumn poem Mary Ann with insight toward the coming of winter, and I dare say your winters are not looked forward too by theywho don't prepare.
Lindsay | 2008-10-07 02:20:22 | 9 |  | 10 | 2 |
06 | |  G'day Melly...
And a very wise adage Melly. Hate eats our minds away to the point of destruction.
Lindsay | 2008-10-07 02:13:19 | 9 |  | 5 | 1 |
07 | |  G'day Glen...
Losing a pet is losing one of the family. They cannot be replaced. It is a sad time for your grand children and yourself Glen.
Lindsay | 2008-10-07 02:10:53 | 8 |  | 48 | 9 |
08 | |  truly said, but i wanted to read more lines to this poem!! | 2008-10-07 01:45:10 | 8 |  | 9 | 1 |
09 | |  lovely. | 2008-10-07 01:36:27 | 8 |  | 11 | 1 |
10 | |  a story, yes it is vivid anna, the substance of 'what was', then told | 2008-10-07 01:14:24 | 9 |  | 144 | 5 |
11 | |  many a scene, well described | 2008-10-07 01:12:25 | 8 |  | 162 | 2 |
12 | |  hey i like that, even the style is yes! inside out, great mortal one! | 2008-10-07 01:10:37 | 9 |  | 42 | 3 |
13 | |  i think you and i are alike...unappreciated..yet not always looking for appreciation..i like to see others smile...i have before caused a smile and vanished..the heartache i've caused possibly won't be forgiven..but we are still of good deeds.thanks for allowing a reflection..your writing is pure and unique..i always enjoy seeing your thoughts..Q | 2008-10-07 00:14:58 | 9 |  | 90 | 1 |
14 | |  a prayer for you my friend..intensity and truth i feel..though you survived..or else the page would still be blank..live on_Q | 2008-10-06 23:55:39 | 10 |  | 177 | 2 |
15 | |  like j. morrison...'into this world we're thrown'...into blindness...we never know quite where we'll land..thanks for the piece to draw insight:) q | 2008-10-06 23:53:06 | 8 |  | 23 | 3 |
16 | |  spence my friend..i needed that glimpse of the life i don't understand..thank you for leaking the soul of a gifted human being..hope you and yours are well:) nivek | 2008-10-06 23:50:52 | 10 |  | 48 | 6 |
17 | |  Maryann I loved this one. your view of Autumn made special by your obvious dislike of winter I think.. especially liked your last stanza on the common cold as human casualties.. hugs Melly | 2008-10-06 23:27:28 | 10 |  | 10 | 2 |
18 | |  Gosh, are we kindred spirits or what? Have you heard Miranda Lambert's new song "More like her" yet? Girl... it could have been written by us. Anyway, I know how you feel here: Not sorry for being yourself, but at the same time so sorry it wasn't enough. Great write. | 2008-10-06 23:23:38 | 10 |  | 78 | 7 |
19 | |  Paul, an enjoyable write. your knowledge of the constellations is much.. Me not much. though I have often wished i could see the milky way.. I enjoyed the seasonal travel thru the stars... Melly
Take care of those stinky hound pups of yours Lol | 2008-10-06 23:21:31 | 9 |  | 31 | 3 |
20 | |  I wish I had your strength Becky. But you are a wise woman. In order to move on, you must first let go. Very good write. | 2008-10-06 23:19:45 | 9 |  | 67 | 8 |
21 | |  we all get used to having things we can't afford and want more and more... it's gonna be a shitty christmas... good write, my friend, cheers :) B. | 2008-10-06 23:17:15 | 9 |  | 88 | 18 |
22 | |  Great write Glen! I felt the sadness your little angels must have felt, but mostly I felt your love for them :) | 2008-10-06 23:17:11 | 9 |  | 48 | 9 |
23 | |  sissy i love this poem, i tried to read it to summer and jeremy but they wouldn't pay attention summer was way to busy hitting jeremy in the penis! | 2008-10-06 23:00:09 | 10 |  | 32 | 3 |
24 | |  Lee , I know you worked your butt off on this one because it is absolutely beautiful (Be Proud my man)
excellent write here. I have read it several times and will read it many more. Did you enter this one in the seasons contest ?? I ponder your words for all the different seasons of our lives and feel a kinship that makes me feel, I mean really feel, do you know what i mean. Great write and you won my heart..... Melly | 2008-10-06 22:55:17 | 10 |  | 48 | 6 |
25 | |  I like your poetry its very vivid. Always a good read. | 2008-10-06 22:44:13 | 10 |  | 67 | 8 |
26 | |  I was beginning to think there for a minute you were talking about me.. My bones creeeeeeeeeeak
all the time. Yes things change and not always for the better. If you can mention the good ole days your getting old.. you had many good lines in here. my favorite the last two.. great write Spence... Melly | 2008-10-06 22:39:06 | 10 |  | 41 | 4 |
27 | |  A nice story with a wonderful conclusion, be strong and learn to carry on..... so much better for the heart and soul. Well done, Becky. Regards, Mary Ann | 2008-10-06 22:32:48 | 9 |  | 67 | 8 |
28 | |  A passionate write, Rey, very well done piece on the state of things in this world we live in. Enjoyed it...doesn't seem like the right remark, but I did...keep speakin' out, maybe some day the manipulator's will be gone. This poet by your side. Regards, Mary Ann | 2008-10-06 22:20:49 | 9 |  | 168 | 3 |
29 | |  Really beautiful, Lee. An enjoyable trip through life from beginning to end. Kind regards, Mary Ann | 2008-10-06 21:59:02 | 10 |  | 48 | 6 |
30 | |  Enjoyed this, Paul. A lot here, especially enjoyed the constellations... they come here too at a different time in our sky when it's not raining puppis. Take care, Mary Ann | 2008-10-06 21:55:37 | 9 |  | 31 | 3 |
31 | |  Riveting story, Lindsay...enjoyed it. We used to fish for rockfish, release them and as their swim bladder held them on the surface bald eagles in the overhanging trees would swoop down and you know the rest. Nobody in their right mind would try to catch a bald eagle, though. Regards, Mary Ann | 2008-10-06 21:51:33 | 10 |  | 18 | 3 |
32 | |  The rose by any other name would smell as sweet were it not for the fact that it graces the table where you sat when he stood you up...nicely done. | 2008-10-06 21:51:06 | 9 |  | 39 | 2 |
33 | |  Another nice addition to the unrequited love genre... | 2008-10-06 21:49:09 | 9 |  | 20 | 1 |
34 | |  Interesting way of telling someone you're hung up on them...nicely done. John | 2008-10-06 21:47:08 | 10 |  | 20 | 1 |
35 | |  Laying in wait he is, scary doctor. Very nice, Lindsay. I really enjoyed the scenery, too. Happy ka-boom fishin', Mary Ann | 2008-10-06 21:45:04 | 9 |  | 16 | 3 |