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Poems - Tough Love

Tough Love

by butterflyzrfree

Don't hesitate, you will be my mate, together we are hate, you sexy and I great, what will unfold, you won't be cold, more hot yes way, your here to stay, you realize, how I hypnotize, with one look from my eyes, its not the size, its the man, who has skill, don't need no pill, thats weak thats chill, I can handle her soft, thats whats meant to be, the women should be free, never hits or throw one,
'less another gangsta come, she got a gun, and hide or run, if we in the middle of the fun, and put down your gun, and that knife in your boot, don't want to shoot, don't mean to cut, my shortie's no slut,and
I'll I put it in your gut, your just a mutt, if you mess with my girl, she's tough, she's my pearl, she's all that can be, and then some you see, so don't quickly judge, she ain't your fudge, and don't smudge my rep, I'm way too adept, I'll find where you kept, all your putas and sluts, and make your money you loser, you ain't gonna choose'er, she too fine for you, she's my shorty Blu, she don't play your game, for love's not the same, she soft but she tough, can handle rough stuff, and she'll call your bluff, 'till you've had enough.

Note: Narrator is a guy.

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Re: Tough Love (Score: 1 )
by nerdgirl on Tuesday, November 17, 2009 (23:00:23)

youre mind wanders in all directions. I love it! this is really cool

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Re: Tough Love by butterflyzrfree on Wednesday, November 18

Re: Tough Love (Score: 1 )
by GlennMcCrary on Wednesday, November 18, 2009 (16:00:40)

This is a pretty good freestyle I gotta say though that when i freestyle i use metaphors to make my point more distinct which is exactly what you did and I like that. Good job. Smile

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Re: Tough Love by butterflyzrfree on Wednesday, November 18

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