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Open Mind

by Phoebe

Shrouded by mystery, and all things unknown
Out where free spirits and angels have flown
Sailing the fringe of surreality...
That’s where my imagination takes me

Captured by laughter or saddened by tears
Stunned by surprises or triggered by fears
Breathless with views of a creamy full moon
or by the brilliance of nature in bloom

Everything, everywhere adds to the mix
Giving to me that delectable fix
Soothing my spirit and feeding my mind
Leaving my weaknesses far, far behind

Little by little encouraging me
To understand this is how it should be
accepting things quite normal will do too
Every day things enjoyed by me and you

Within the space of an average day's range
In the familiar, where nothing is strange
Grateful am I with my functioning brain
Shows me the difference ‘twixt fancy and plain

Only one thing though about all of this
Once thinking starts it can still go amiss
Only because in a roundabout way
It has no perception of time sad to say.

Then there this problem unfortunately
Poems like these go on indefinitely
So it will be until someone has found
A way to totally close the mind down

~Phoebe~





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Re: Open Mind (Score: 1 )
by flowergirl on Monday, March 12, 2012 (17:05:40)
Wow! You did a lot of thinking in this one. Like it a lot. Nice way you rhyme. Great job!! Very Happy

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    Re: Open Mind (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Monday, March 12, 2012 (22:55:17)
    I'm not totally happy with this I think it needs some work on it but I'm too lazy ...one day some kind GP friend might show me how to workshop stuff..but thanks for your comment and rate I truly appreciate it..Smile-Phoebe

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Re: Open Mind (Score: 1 )
by rondo on Monday, March 12, 2012 (22:57:31)
the perfect outlet for attention deficit dissorder Laughing ...nice work Feepy....peace

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    Re: Open Mind (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Tuesday, March 13, 2012 (23:52:56)
    hahaha, nah it's all that chocolate does that..thankee kindlee..Smile-Sleepy Feepy Very Happy

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Re: Open Mind (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Tuesday, March 13, 2012 (07:42:46)
wouldn't it be nice to just have an off switch for the mind....especially around 3am. a complicated psychological write pheebs - paora and the mind bending hound.

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    Re: Open Mind (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Wednesday, March 14, 2012 (17:39:07)
    Funny thing is I wondered if it was ever going to stop, and at times I felt as if it was all over the place, even now I think it is..see what thinking does to one??..I despair!!.Smile-Pheebs

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Re: Open Mind (Score: 1 )
by Zbird on Tuesday, March 13, 2012 (11:30:58)
love the poem and especially love the end! yep! I know that feeling of the poem not finding and ending so you have to say hey poem! it's time to stop! great job and a great poem! Smile

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    Re: Open Mind (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Wednesday, March 14, 2012 (17:40:46)
    Whew! I'm glad I'm not the only one with the same occasional challenge - thanks Bonnie..Smile-Phoebe

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Re: Open Mind (Score: 1 )
by Zbird on Tuesday, March 13, 2012 (11:31:54)
sorry was enthralled by the ending I forgot to add that I also like the way this poem flows and rolls off the tongue. again...great job!

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    Re: Open Mind (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Wednesday, March 14, 2012 (17:41:55)
    Yes it does kind of lope along I guess, I still think it needs some work on it - do you use the workshop in here much?..Smile-Phoebe

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