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Poems - "I Want More"

"I Want More"

by Brennan

I see myself holding you close to me,
Squeezing your body tight.
But for all I see as I daydream-
I know I'll get tenfold tonight.

Running my palms across your breast,
As you tremble and bite your lip.
Feeling your hands upon my chest,
The softness of each fingertip.

Tasting your neck so sweet, so soft,
And slowly lowering my kiss.
Over pert nipples, across your navel,
And finally into pure bliss.

Looking upon your face from below-
As you tilt back your head.
Feeling your fountains begin to flow-
As you ease back on the bed.

Your "innocent little devil" look-
Crying insatiably with the sensation.
Lip to lip lapping up every drip-
From the well of your creation.

The way you pull me up by the hair-
To the heat of your mouth, on fire.
No other thoughts, no other cares,
Just the quenching of mad desire.

Riding the tide of passion,
Pushing my love into you.
On the waves of your emotion-
In slow motion, so sweet and true.

Pulse pounding in resounding rapture,
Taken to the hilt, then just past.
Rhythm growing, faces glowing,
The climax coming fast.

That heated, illicit look-
Of ecstasy across your eyes.
The culmination nearing-
Within your undulating thighs.
Echoing throughout the heavens-
On overindulgent cries.

The sultry look upon your face-
In reaching that gyrating gush.
The way you bite my fingers-
When I try to make you hush.

Your arching back, your fingernails,
Your perfume mixed with sweat.
The way you keep rubbing against me-
With your insides already so wet.

The way when I'm beat dead and ready-
To fall face first to the floor,
You put your sweet lips to my ear-
And whisper, "I want more! "

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Re: "I Want More"
by Anonymous on Wednesday, August 12, 2009 (15:13:43)

you made it very intense thru ur detailed yet clean narrative
liked it

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Re: "I Want More" by Brennan on Friday, September 04

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by Anonnimus on Wednesday, August 12, 2009 (15:15:13)

crap forgot to log on

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Re: "I Want More" by Brennan on Thursday, September 24

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by rondo on Thursday, August 13, 2009 (03:57:11)

GOOD RHYME, nice lines,might suggest syllabic break down (see easyeverett) but excellent piece.....rondo

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Re: "I Want More" by Brennan on Friday, September 04

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by badmalthus on Friday, August 21, 2009 (03:33:11)

Excellent Brennan.......drew you into each new line.
Cheers.......Harry

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Re: "I Want More" by Brennan on Friday, September 04

Re: "I Want More"
by Anonymous on Wednesday, September 02, 2009 (11:08:39)

I think that this is a fantastic poem full of passion, its very erotic in a clever and sophisticated way. Who is the lucky girl!!! wish it was me Surprised

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Re: "I Want More" by Brennan on Friday, September 04

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by nerdgirl on Wednesday, September 02, 2009 (16:54:07)

oooweee! I want more too!!! This is one hot poem!

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Re: "I Want More" by Brennan on Friday, September 04

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by 123grace on Friday, September 04, 2009 (08:16:20)

Hello Brennan,

I think that this poem is very hot and it actually turned me on. You are a very talented writer and I would like to see a few more poems from you like this. The time that you right about must have been intense!!!

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Re: "I Want More" by Brennan on Friday, September 04

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by angeroseblue on Thursday, October 01, 2009 (00:16:26)

OHHHH WHY DO I TORTURE MY MIND WITH THIS TYPE OF POEM
THE LAST STANZA IS SO HOTTT.... Embarassed

THIS IS STRAIGHT DOWN THE LINE SEXY.... Wink

IF SOMEONE WHISPERS THEY WANT MORE,,,,HOTTTT

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Re: "I Want More" (Score: 1 )
by sschubert on Thursday, November 12, 2009 (18:40:58)

This is an excellent write! And I'm with Libby - it is slightly torturous!

XOXOXO

Steph Embarassed

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