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Poems - Fuck the land of opportunities

Fuck the land of opportunities

by StoneColD

I was born on a land that proclames it self
As the land of freedom, respect and opportunities
They gave me a citizenship, proud of my self
But then they kept me out of their facilities
I'm either too big or got rabies
Them moms look at me and hide their fuckin babies
I just wanted to grab the sharpest knife close to me
And slit their throat, piss on them just for dissin me
What you gotta a problem with this?
Well shut the fuck up and read the rest of this bitch
Cuz my head got this glitch
It's kinda like an itch
It scratchin me and makin me spit the craziest shit
Fuck democracy! it's just a hypocratie
Of them mudafuckin politics
Who said they gave the biggest liberty
To a certain people, but they kept fuckin with them
Every crime is related to an "african American"
Why can't they just say an american?
No that will only hurt their pride
Well i raise my fingers to them, and to the gay pride
Yeah i say it out loud!
And who ever wants to argue, i'll stomp him on the ground
He'll be worse than mince meat next the hell hound
Fuck american politics, fuck american hipocrites
Fuck american warfare, fuck american racists
Guess who's the next fucker i'll raise my finger to like an atheist...????

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Re: Fuck the land of opportunities (Score: 1 )
by scriptum on Tuesday, October 06, 2009 (09:40:40)

Well, I see someone came back, alive and definitely kicking it. Razz

I was wondering where you'd gone, I didn't see your name popping up but I commented in another place. Wink

Now about this poem ..... I think we should wrestle. Very Happy

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Re: Fuck the land of opportunities (Score: 1 )
by angeroseblue on Tuesday, October 06, 2009 (09:55:36)

Every crime is related to an "african American"
Why can't they just say an american?...
i love these 2 lines
and Shocked

i enjoy you very much Wink

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Re: Fuck the land of opportunities (Score: 1 )
by nerdgirl on Tuesday, October 06, 2009 (11:39:27)

Im not too proud of my country right now. Breaks my heart to see whats going on. Good write Omar.
Every crime is related to an "african American"
Why can't they just say an american?
I agree with you, color shouldnt have anything to do with that.
You see gang related stuff happen all the time yes, but so far I dont recall any african-americans shooting up schools or blowing themselves and 10 other ppl up.... a crime is a crime, regardless. I wish it would all stop but mankind has reached a low and i dont think we will get out of it anytime soon.

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Re: Fuck the land of opportunities (Score: 1 )
by butterflyzrfree on Wednesday, October 07, 2009 (16:37:22)

I love this line:" I'm either too big or got rabies" It is just too funny! Great write! Just don't give me that finger... Sad

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by schlegel on Thursday, October 08, 2009 (21:54:17)

Poor choice of language. The borders are open. Was good to me and my family. Cheers Jon

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by thewholesoul on Sunday, October 11, 2009 (19:38:55)

feelin the hate man, lovin it. i told you you'd be back LOL. here 10 stars take it easy brother.

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