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Poems - My Woman

My Woman

by BrokenWordsPoet

My Woman

Being pricked…
On the finger…
Little spot of blood…
Red like…
Cherry pain…
Rushed between lips…
Thirst…
Quenches the pain…
Savor the taste…
Of salt…
It is life…
I wipe away…
Her tears…
She stands there…
Rubbing her eyes…
Looking like a woman…
That is still…
A little child…

A kiss…

Makes…

It all feel better…

I love the tips…

Of her fingers…

Now…

I spend my life…

Breaking thorns off roses……

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Re: My Woman (Score: 1 )
by WordLover on Monday, October 26, 2009 (20:27:09)

I feel a lot of love in this poem. Just beautiful.
Sandy (WordLover)

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Re: My Woman (Score: 1 )
by angeroseblue on Tuesday, October 27, 2009 (08:27:50)

i have really taken a liking to this style
a kiss does make it all better...depending on how deep the thorn
stuck

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Re: My Woman (Score: 1 )
by BrokenWordsPoet on Tuesday, October 27, 2009 (09:35:14)

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Re: My Woman (Score: 1 )
by nerdgirl on Tuesday, October 27, 2009 (19:52:04)

This is sooo sweet.
I spend my life breaking thorns off roses. Thats the kind of stuff that makes women all warm and fuzzy on the inside! I love it!

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Re: My Woman (Score: 1 )
by Melly on Tuesday, October 27, 2009 (20:01:32)

Beautiful sentiment . Love your style. Sooooo sweet to be a women when there are men like you. Hugs Melly

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Re: My Woman (Score: 1 )
by Julie on Tuesday, October 27, 2009 (20:54:59)

A BIG 10 and a FAVORITE!
How lucky for the woman who is your mate.
Those last two lines should be ones that the world needs to read. It is the stuff that catch phrases are made of!
I LOVE that!
Every woman should have someone in their lives who will be willing to break the thorns off their roses.
Thanks for this. ;0)

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Re: My Woman (Score: 1 )
by thewholesoul on Thursday, October 29, 2009 (15:33:43)

just droppin' in to say hi. lol

that was a very sweet poem my friend. i'm going to be firing some love poems out meself next month. its nice to watch you expanding on themes.

take good care, conor

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