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Poems - injured bird

injured bird

by Tink

in my bed tired and sick
the truth hits me like a brick
where is the help I need
why do I have to plead
for support or a good word
laying here like an injured bird

after I gave all my good will
running for you while you were ill
no stone left unturned
for you I was concerned

healing nicely and finding out
what real care is all about
support from an unexpected source
help for me in full force
came in the form of moral means
blew my sorrow to smithereens

the ones who nurtured me
navigated the rough sea
will have for always my gratitude
reshaped my bad attitude
allowing my good energy to flow
with a renewed spirit I grow

believing again in good deeds
taking care of others needs
is always the right thing to do
helping and giving aid even to you

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Re: injured bird (Score: 1 )
by Greg on Friday, October 30, 2009 (10:47:50)

very nice tink i hope you are better now

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Re: injured bird by Tink on Saturday, October 31

Re: injured bird (Score: 1 )
by Zbird on Friday, October 30, 2009 (13:07:59)

what a lovely poem! started off so sad and negative but ended with such a happy and positive note. well written!

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Re: injured bird by Tink on Saturday, October 31

Re: injured bird (Score: 1 )
by WordLover on Friday, October 30, 2009 (18:18:03)

Tink - I love the fact that the poem began with what sounds like anger and frustration, and ends with love. Very nice.

Sandy

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Re: injured bird by Tink on Saturday, October 31

Re: injured bird (Score: 1 )
by Dreaming-Demon on Saturday, October 31, 2009 (20:27:05)

LOve this...I hope you feel better TinK Smile

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Re: injured bird by Tink on Saturday, October 31

Re: injured bird (Score: 1 )
by CRUSH-247 on Tuesday, November 03, 2009 (07:25:14)

Great job on this tink... Cool

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