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Poems - simply sublime

simply sublime

by Tink

under a white thick blanket of bubbles
soaking up the heat
letting go of all my troubles
just what I need

head resting eyes heavy and shut
candle light dancing
releasing my favorite scent of hazelnut
enjoyment enhancing

toes playfully moving to the sound
of music playing
feeling tension leave coming unwound
water softly swaying

skin tingling with tiny bumps
cool breeze on me
submerging again relaxation trumps
feeling at ease

how sweet it is to be able to
have this time
for myself it was so overdue
simply sublime

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Re: simply sublime (Score: 1 )
by WordLover on Friday, November 06, 2009 (20:34:47)

Tink, this one really does flow beautifully. It's so relaxing I could go to Zzzzzzzzzzzzz. Lovely.

Sandy (WordLover)

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Re: simply sublime by Tink on Saturday, November 07

Re: simply sublime (Score: 1 )
by Dreaming-Demon on Saturday, November 07, 2009 (03:57:52)

simply beautiful, well done

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Re: simply sublime by Tink on Saturday, November 07

Re: simply sublime (Score: 1 )
by Tiku on Saturday, November 07, 2009 (13:35:54)

very nice and sweet.

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Re: simply sublime by Tink on Saturday, November 07

Re: simply sublime (Score: 1 )
by Greg on Saturday, November 07, 2009 (15:32:47)

very nice tink Smile

well done
peace
Greg

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Re: simply sublime by Tink on Saturday, November 07

Re: simply sublime (Score: 1 )
by maryanns on Saturday, November 07, 2009 (17:42:58)

Wooo girl... your poem was almost as pleasant and relaxing as enjoying a bubble bath myself! What a wonderful idea... I do believe I have the time.
Really enjoyed this, Mary Ann

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Re: simply sublime by Tink on Saturday, November 07

Re: simply sublime (Score: 1 )
by Zbird on Saturday, November 07, 2009 (20:55:19)

oh yeah!!! it truly is simply sublime!!! good job!

don't forget to join Melly's sock hop slam! should be great fun! read the comments first as it has a twist Smile

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Re: simply sublime by Tink on Sunday, November 08

Re: simply sublime (Score: 1 )
by rondo on Saturday, November 07, 2009 (22:34:46)

wow Tink this is a perfect poem....great rhymes...awesome flow...emotions and subject identity throughout the piece an excellent level of poetry......look out GP Tink is busting out......................rondo

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