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Touched By Blue

by BrokenWordsPoet

Touched By Blue

I walked away...
My back to you...
No forgiveness...
For my best friend...
Like my back is to a wall...
Forgotten...
My mind on a cloud...
Floating by...
You have disappeared...
I cannot see you...
And now I see you again...
I remember you...
We were friends...
I do not remember your name...
I hope you can forgive me...
A tear has fallen...
The cloud disappeared...
Into blue...
I am touched...
By sadness...
I cannot remember your name...
It has disappeared...
Into blue...

I am touched...
By blue...

Forgive me...





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Re: Touched By Blue (Score: 1 )
by angeroseblue on Wednesday, November 11, 2009 (23:35:17)
very mysterious write
i enjoyed the tone of the poem
very good


Re: Touched By Blue (Score: 1 )
by nerdgirl on Thursday, November 12, 2009 (19:32:49)
thats sad and lovely and as Libby said mysterious all in one. as always, I enjoyed the read!


Re: Touched By Blue (Score: 1 )
by alanb on Wednesday, December 16, 2009 (11:40:05)
Great piece. Methinks there may well be a very interesting story behind this one! (Is there?... Smile). Enjoyed it.
peace - alan



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