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Poems - Among Dead Walls
| | Among Dead Wallsby oxavier
Looking at your face makes me dizzy,
How could you not believe,
I said, my name was bill
But you took me for a gentleman.
Cruising the roads, I go
To find lonely souls, in need of help
I rescue them from their despair,
Allow them to murmur words of hope.
Understanding their miseries,
I decide their fate rests in my hands
Very pious my deeds,
I set forth to reap my destiny.
Walking alone, were you
When I decided to stop by,
And share my thoughts,
A cunning guy like me can be overwhelming.
So much for your faith,
That you decided to accompany me,
To death’s torture chamber,
With open arms I welcomed you.
The dark side it is, in deed
But from the light,
You think it dark,
And creepy to venture in;
Coming from the dark,
My eyes cannot be colorblind,
To overlook a wonderful body like yours;
I would take pride in that.
Reaching my place, you want to come in?
My lady you are in for a surprise!
I will treat you so well,
That you will forget to remember.
Big plans I have got,
Happy to share them with you,
Now that you are finally here,
I ponder over stale thoughts.
Asking me for help?
I thought it lame,
Since I was the one who needed help,
And your fragrance running through my veins.
As you sat gazing at nothing,
I add morphine to your lifeless body,
And drag you to hells chamber,
Never to be seen again.
Strapping you to my wonder,
I lose myself in your beauty,
And think how rare, you are
Making you a unique piece to my puzzle.
Now as I sit before you,
Lost in your presence,
I cannot hold myself from,
Penning down that moment.
“O sweet beauty of mine,
How I long to send chills through your spine,
With sweet anguish I await,
And drag your corpse through horror’s gate.
Strapped to my chair,
Your breath lost in thin air,
Thoughts growing stale,
Lying lifeless, I leave you impale.
As I lie long time in wait,
For you to open your eyes to fate,
Pondering over our moments together,
I decide to make you scream and shudder.
Pointing my knife down your throat,
I enjoy your blee, like a goat,
With no time to waste,
I stuff it down your throat in haste.
Watching you suffer and tremble,
Your voice lost in whispers and mumble,
Another rip across your neck,
Your blood flowing like a lake.
My mind confused with too much anxiety,
Cleaning my act, I don’t have eternity,
I launch your body in dark walls,
Continuing I move on, to rack them all.
An asset to my great collection,
As I watch you there in recollection,
How I wished it could last longer,
Among mutilated bodies your harbinger.”
- Your Psycho Friend
I seal your death with a cold kiss,
But your memories, continue to haunt me.
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Re: Among Dead Walls
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by jo.pree on Friday, November 13, 2009 (05:11:59) |
Very nice write in terms of form, structure, wording etc A very unique attempt. But the subject you ve chosen is quite haunting and makes me really feel intimidated. I am not able to come out of the imagery that the poem has evoked in my mind. Toooo haunting but i think that is your success as a poet. I just wish there are nt any serial killers like this in the whole world. Let this earth be a safe place for every living being.
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Re: Among Dead Walls
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by oxavier on Saturday, November 14, 2009 (08:48:10) |
thanks appreciate it
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Re: Among Dead Walls
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by Dreaming-Demon on Friday, November 13, 2009 (09:09:04) |
WOW....now this is sick...beautiful...i love it.....i think i feel a tear in my eye...
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Re: Among Dead Walls
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by oxavier on Saturday, November 14, 2009 (08:50:32) |
thanks for stopping by bro...appreciate it
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Re: Among Dead Walls
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by nerdgirl on Friday, November 13, 2009 (18:05:23) |
oh wow, if this were a movie... ID SO WATCH IT!!!
this is great man, and having a poem within the poem. HELL YEAH!
awesome write! oh, and heres a tissue for dreaming. lol
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Re: Among Dead Walls
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by oxavier on Saturday, November 14, 2009 (08:52:24) |
ha ha ha thanks nerdy
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Re: Among Dead Walls
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by Disfrazada on Friday, November 13, 2009 (23:00:12) |
WTF!!! this is sick  ... well done
Disfrazada
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Re: Among Dead Walls
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by oxavier on Saturday, November 14, 2009 (08:53:41) |
thank you....the pleasure is all mine
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Re: Among Dead Walls
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by Unbound on Sunday, November 15, 2009 (08:33:44) |
Ur a devil Ozzy.. 
Its a very nice thought to link poems like that. You've proved time and again that ur a true poet by not jus giving us different genres of poems but also by the way you present them. I can see a lot of thought and effort has gone into this one. One of your best so far.
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Re: Among Dead Walls
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by oxavier on Sunday, November 15, 2009 (22:59:22) |
Thanks Unbound......appreciate it
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