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So Close

by BrokenWordsPoet

So Close

Here I am...
Sitting in front...
Of my word processor...
Yet...
I am so far away...
Walking...
On the beach...
Counting the grains of sand...
I am so far away...
Standing in the rain...
Watching the raindrops...
Bead off the rim of my canvas hat...
I am so far away...
Listening to the radio...
Playing an old blues song...
My mind has drifted...
I am so far away...
Sitting in front...
Of my word processor...
Thinking of you...
I am so far away...
You are...
So close...

To me...............





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Re: So Close (Score: 1 )
by WordLover on Monday, November 16, 2009 (18:15:48)
Absolutely beautiful! I feel like I'm right there - and the song, is it Clapton? Wonderful write.

Sandy

    Re: So Close (Score: 1 )
    by BrokenWordsPoet on Wednesday, November 18, 2009 (12:49:06)
    Clapton? I don't know... Someone I love and think about... Yes... BWP... James... Thank you for commenting and rating... The right songs do that to me...


Re: So Close (Score: 1 )
by thewholesoul on Wednesday, November 18, 2009 (10:28:26)
beautifully written james - you really captured a moment in time through words.

best wishes
conor


Re: So Close (Score: 1 )
by Tink on Friday, November 20, 2009 (11:50:28)
Oh yes...this is familiar and you made it so dreamy.

( I don't have the right words it seems giggle )

Tink Smile



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